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美国陆军模块化建设是美军自二战以来最深远，最激进的军事实践活动。本文在分析了美国陆军军模块化发展的背景和动因基础上，全面系统的梳理美国陆军模块化理论和实践，深入研究其体系的理论理念发展，编制体制发展和模块化装备建设等核心问题，揭示美陆军模块化转型的特点，实质和规律，深入挖掘了美国陆军模块化建设方面的有益经验.最后分析了美国陆军模块化建设对我军信息化的启示，为推动我军新形势下信息化建设和全面发展提供借鉴和参考。

The modularconstruction of The U.S. Army is not in terms with the most profound militarypractice but also the most radical one since the World War II. The research analyzing the background and motivationto the development of themodular construction for The U.S. Army, the research hassystematically reviewed the theory and practice of U.S Army modularization,explored the primary development and organization of U.S. modularization such ashistory, theory, military system, equipment construction, focus areas, etc...On the basis of these work, the research revealed the essence, characteristicsand rules of U.S. modularization，improved ourrecognition of U.S.modularization and explored useful experience in U.S. modularization construction.At last, the research made a contrast analysis of U.S. modularizationconstruction and proposed some suggestions to China's Information Construction of Army in New Situation。

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建议如下
所有的The U.S. Army-需要将the的首字母改成小写t
美国陆军的专有名词是United States Army
is not in terms with这是想表达什么？我以为你是要用not only ...but also...的词组吧？如果是，in terms with要改成only
The research analyzing the background and motivationto the development of themodular construction for The U.S. Army,
将开头的analyzing改成has analyzed
the research hassystematically reviewed the theory and practice of U.S Army modularization,explored the primary development and organization of U.S. modularization such ashistory, theory, military system, equipment construction, focus areas, etc...
在这句话开头加个and，然后把the research去掉，跟前半句构成并列句
New Situation
把这两个大写首字母改成小写
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