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短文改错。 I am a very active girl in my class.I have many hobby, such as wr...

短文改错。 I am a very active girl in my class.I have many hobby, such as writing stories, playingpiano and singing English songs.My most favorite subject is English.I became interest in it when I was very young.My dream is to study abroad.But now I need to improve my Englishand learn more about west culture as well.I will be able to improving the friendship between China and the rest of the world.I hoped my dream will come true.And I believe in nobody canchange my mind.I will work harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens!_________________________________________________________________________-

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