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帮忙翻译自荐信，24小时内回答再追加50分，绝不食言

自 荐 信

尊敬的领导：
您好！很感谢您在百忙之中阅读这封自荐信.
当您翻开这一页的时候，您已经为我打开了通往成功的一扇大门，感谢您能在我即将踏上人生又一崭新征程的时候，给我一次宝贵机会. 如果您能够给予建议与指导，我将不胜感激.
我叫XX，XXXX年X月毕业于XX大学XX学院通信与网络技术专业。在大学的这几年学习生活里，我思索人生，超越自我，走向成熟！
XXXX年X月，我加入了xxxx有限公司奶制品部，做了一名销售部门的员工。在一年多的工作中，我学到了很多商品知识. 与此同时，我不断钻研学习零售业知识，以全面的知识技能拓展思维、激发潜能、适应环境来追求个人价值的最大化，
最终在XXXX年底获得了公司优秀员工奖.在此之后，我于XXXX年X月被公司任命为肉类部主管助理.在新的工作岗位上我谨慎行事，对自己的行动负责，积极创造，超越狭义个人利益，追求整体利益最大化；在团队中，我学会了以公司的核心以及目标为基准，相互信任，协调运作，突破组织结构的局限，追求部门效能最大化。
昨天已成为历史，未来的辉煌要靠今天的脚踏实地、坚持不懈地努力去实现，我坚定地认为：天生我才必有用！虽然我平凡，但我并不平庸。尽管在众多应聘者中，我不一定是最优秀的，但我仍很自信，我会做得更好！
给我一个机会，我会尽职尽责，让您满意.
此致
敬礼

自荐人：
感谢大家帮忙翻译，特别是zzseiya和暮雨山二位，可以看的出是很用心的，再次感谢！我想，可能是我没有说明清楚，所以在翻译上让zzseiya有些误解。这篇中文自荐信是我为我们公司内部招聘准备的，其中有些地方看起来比较矛盾是因为涉及到工作中的具体职能，这里就不再多说了。

Answer 1

楼主所写的自荐信，很适合他的求职，只要把整封信再修饰一下就行。毕竟他的专业和经历不适合写更完美的求职信。毕竟这个自荐信是跟简历放在一起的。过而不及啊！

以下是我个人翻译，供楼主参考

Self-Recommend Letter或 Cover letter 自荐信

尊敬的领导：
Honorable leaders,

您好！很感谢您在百忙之中阅读这封自荐信.
Good day! Thank you very much for making time from busy to read my letter.

当您翻开这一页的时候，您已经为我打开了通往成功的一扇大门，感谢您能在我即将踏上人生又一崭新征程的时候，给我一次宝贵机会. 如果您能够给予建议与指导，我将不胜感激.
When you open this page, you have opened the gate leading to success for me. Thank you very much for giving me a chance when I am going to start a new lifetime journey. If I could be under your direction and with your advice, I would make a grateful acknowledgement for you.

我叫XX，XXXX年X月毕业于XX大学XX学院通信与网络技术专业。在大学的这几年学习生活里，我思索人生，超越自我，走向成熟！
My name is xxx, graduated from xxx University xxx College with the degree of Communication & network technic major in (June或July) XXXX. In the years of being a academician,I thought for life, and took larger than myself, being grown up.

XXXX年X月，我加入了xxxx有限公司奶制品部，做了一名销售部门的员工。在一年多的工作中，我学到了很多商品知识. 与此同时，我不断钻研学习零售业知识，以全面的知识技能拓展思维、激发潜能、适应环境来追求个人价值的最大化，
I joined the XXXX Co., Ltd.milk products section, being a staff of sales department. I learned a lot of merchandise's knowledge in more than on years of work. At the same time, I intensively and continuously studied the retailing knowledge, enlarged my thinking, inspired the potential and adjusted to a the environment, with comprehensive knowledge, to maximize my life value.

最终在XXXX年底获得了公司优秀员工奖.在此之后，我于XXXX年X月被公司任命为肉类部主管助理.在新的工作岗位上我谨慎行事，对自己的行动负责，积极创造，超越狭义个人利益，追求整体利益最大化；在团队中，我学会了以公司的核心以及目标为基准，相互信任，协调运作，突破组织结构的局限，追求部门效能最大化。
Finally I gained the excellent staff award in the end of XXXX. Since that, I was appointed as the director assistant of Meat Dept., in XX,XXXX. I felt my way in the new position (此处中文句子跟后面有冲突：既然谨慎行事，又如何积极创造？）, to be responsible for my work; I was energic in creation and surmounted the personalist the parochial self-interest to maximize the whole interest; In the teams, I learned that all should be relative to the company's cores and targets, with mutual credits, coordinating with each other, to break the limit of organization structure and maximize the department's efficiency.

昨天已成为历史，未来的辉煌要靠今天的脚踏实地、坚持不懈地努力去实现，我坚定地认为：天生我才必有用！虽然我平凡，但我并不平庸。尽管在众多应聘者中，我不一定是最优秀的，但我仍很自信，我会做得更好！
What happened yesterday has become a history. A glorious future needs to be realized by hardheaded and remorseless working from now on. I has great confidence that every man have his gift. I am ordinary, but not a mediocrity. Though I may not be the top one among those candidates, but I, still believe, would do better!

给我一个机会，我会尽职尽责，让您满意.
Please give me a chance, you will be satisfied for my work.（建议尽职尽责改为其他积极的话语，毕竟尽职并不能被主考官看重）

Yours sincerely
此致
敬礼
XXXX

Answer 2

Zi Jianxin

Dear leaders:
Hello! Thank you very much in his busy schedule to read this in Zi Jianxin.
When you open this page when you have as I opened the door to a successful, thank you in another life I am about to embark on a new journey, give me a valuable opportunity if you can give to Advice and guidance, I would be grateful.
My name is XX, XXXX X, XX, graduated from the University College of Communication and XX network technology professionals. In the past few years the University of learning life, I think life, better ourselves and to mature!
X XXXX years, I joined the Department of xxxx Limited dairy products, do a sales staff. In more than a year of work, I learned a lot of knowledge goods. At the same time, I have been studying and studying retail knowledge, in order to fully develop the knowledge and skills of thinking and to stimulate potential to adapt to the environment to maximize the value of the individual pursuit,
XXXX in the final end of the company's outstanding staff award. After this, I XXXX X in the company, was appointed as the assistant director of meat. In the new work, I caution, accountable for their actions, to create, Beyond the narrow personal interests and seek to maximize the overall interest in the team, I learned to the core of the company and the target for the benchmark, mutual trust and coordination of the operation to break through the limitations of the organizational structure, maximize the pursuit of sector performance.
Yesterday, has become history, the brilliant future depends on today's down-to-earth, making unremitting efforts to realize, I firmly believe that: Tianshengwocai must be used! Although I am extraordinary, but I do not mediocrity. Despite the many applicants, I may not necessarily be the best, but I remain confident, I will do better!
Give me a chance, I will dutifully to your satisfaction.
Sincerely
Salute

Recommended himself:

Answer 3

Dear leaders:
Hello! Thank you very much in his busy schedule to read this in Zi Jianxin.
When you open this page when you have as I opened the door to a successful, thank you in another life I am about to embark on a new journey, give me a valuable opportunity if you can give to Advice and guidance, I would be grateful.
My name is XX, XXXX X, XX, graduated from the University College of Communication and XX network technology professionals. In the past few years the University of learning life, I think life, better ourselves and to mature!
X XXXX years, I joined the Ministry of dairy products xxxx Limited has done a sales staff. In more than a year of work, I learned a lot of knowledge goods. At the same time, I have been studying and studying retail knowledge, in order to fully develop the knowledge and skills of thinking and to stimulate potential to adapt to the environment to maximize the value of the individual pursuit,
XXXX in the final end of the company's outstanding staff award. After this, I XXXX X in the company, was appointed as the assistant director of meat. In the new work, I caution, accountable for their actions, to create, Beyond the narrow personal interests and seek to maximize the overall interest in the team, I learned to the core of the company and the target for the benchmark, mutual trust and coordination of the operation to break through the limitations of the organizational structure, maximize the pursuit of sector performance.
Yesterday, has become history, the brilliant future depends on today's down-to-earth, making unremitting efforts to realize, I firmly believe that: Tianshengwocai must be used! Although I am extraordinary, but I do not mediocrity. Despite the many applicants, I may not necessarily be the best, but I remain confident, I will do better!
Give me a chance, I will dutifully to your satisfaction.
Sincerely
Salute

Recommended himself:

Answer 4

我帮你人工翻译，包和的写的中文符合，但是在之前我想告诉楼主，你出的题目是写简历吗也就是通常的cv,curriculum vitae或a resume，如果是 格式不符合哦~~并且内容也没有简历的东西哦，但是我先满足你的提问，照你的意思翻译一遍

Dear officer(你如果用领导会很怪的superior,leader替换officer)
Greetings(这个最接近你开头你好的书面表达，由于你文中问题转英文问题甚多故不在说明，直接帮你找最合适的表达）,
算了我给你个完整，照你给的这中文东东翻译的
CV or Resume(内容不符合CV) 简历
Self introduction letter自荐信

Dear officer

Greetings,Thank you for reading this self introduction letter,when you open this page you've opened the door leading to sucess for me, thanks for you give me an such valuable opportunity when i step on new stage of my career. If only you could conduct me and advise me, i will feel most grateful.
My (author's) name is 名San 姓Zhang,I graduated from xx University xx department Telecommunication and Network division on 月，2000年。 I ponder on lifer, conquer myself and step forward mature during the days in University.

月，年，I worked for xxx dairy Co.,Ltd, as a worker of sales department. With one year working experiences, I have gained many business terms,at the same time, I also buried my head in retailing knowledge in order improve my thinking, inspire my potiential and be more adaptible to enviorment, to seek the individual value broadeness.
At the end, I have been rewarded as distinction worker in that company, shortly afterwards,I was assigned to the meat department as a assitant to supervisor. for a new start,I act with discretion and duty, be creative and ative,surpass，surpass the descent individual interests, pursuing the maximasation of interests of all, in the team, i have learnt to develop based on company and its objectives, with mutual belief, to coordinate, to break the limit of organization structure, and to seek the efficiency maximazation.
yesterday is already history,the realization of the birght future is in the line with todays hard work, and persistence of endeavor, every dog has its day, i am ordinary,but not extra, i might not be extraordinary, but I believe i can do better!
Give my an opportunity,I will do my best,and you wouldn't be disappointed

Regards

写你名字

我真是一路帮你翻下来的，照你写的，但是发现的你写的中文简历内容的很多问题，太多，有专业性缺乏，以及文化的适应表达，但是为了尊重原文原意，我想这个翻译再恰当不过了
还有，英文你再怎么写信或写什么是不可能和别人真"敬礼"Salute 的...

Answer 5

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