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一共有10个错误Dear Mike, Are you feeling any better? As you know it , our trip to Peace City is originally planned for June 15th . However , it has been delayed until June 20th . Be certain to arrive at the school gate before 7:00 a.m . We'll first go on an hour guided tour of the Tiger River , when will be followed by a visit to Lion Hill , starting at about 9:00 a.m . Bring your lunch as we will be picnicking on the top of the hill at noon . On the afternoon , we'll pay visit to the History Museum at 3:00 , for which we have to pay another $ 5 , so the totally cost will be $ 55 . We plan to return at about 5:00 p.m . Don't forget wear sports shoes. Hope you join us in the coming trip. Alice

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Dear Mike,Are you feeling any(much,感觉好与不好是不可数的，所以不能用any) better? As you know it（删除it，as you know是固定搭配，固定词组） , our trip to Peace City is originally planned for（on，在具体的某一天是用介词on） June 15th . However , it has been delayed until（具体的某一天用介词on） June 20th . Be certain to arrive at the school gate before 7:00 a.m . We'll first go on an hour guided（guiding，补充花一个小时的内容） tour of the Tiger River , when will be followed（follow，主语一致，不是我们被带到） by a visit to Lion Hill , starting at about 9:00 a.m . Bring your lunch as we will be picnicking on the top of the hill at noon . On（上午或下午应用介词in） the afternoon , we'll pay（加a，固定搭配：pay a visit to） visit to the History Museum at 3:00 , for which we have to pay another $ 5 , so the totally cost will be $ 55 . We plan to return at about 5:00 p.m . Don't forget （加to，wear是动词，要用动词不定式）wear sports shoes.Hope you join us in the coming trip.Alice