英语作文:根据表格内容写一篇60词以上的日记.

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小妹洞不小
2013-06-01
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On May 1st, Saturday, My girlfriend and I go to the Sansu park. It's sunny but cool, gentle wind breezes. What a good chance to have fun outdoor! We take a walk, and climb the mountains. Under a big tree I take photos for her. Inside the shop, she buys me a delicate gift. And because it's a holiday, there are many people going outside, not only on the street but also inside the park is crowed. We are tired but so happy to be together and wait for another chance to enjoy ourselves.

妹妹,我这连过去式都没使用啊!要不缩小一点:
On May 1st, Saturday, My girlfriend and I go to the Sansu park. It's sunny but cool.There are many people, it's crowed.We take a walk, and climb the mountains. I take photo for her. She buys me a nice gift. We are tired but so happy to be together.

不能再缩写再简化了,否则就不能满足题目的要求。
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那就过去式一下嘛~求~
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On May 1st, Saturday, My girlfriend and I went to the Sansu park. It was sunny but cool.There were many people, it was crowed. We took a walk, and climbed the mountains. I took photos for her. She bought me a nice gift and I like it so much. We were tired but so happy to have a nice time.
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2013-06-02
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a busy day because I needed to finish everything with my work giving me a complete free weekend. Before leaving my office, I made a phone call to my girlfriend Sarah, in a hope that we could see a new movie together on Saturday. But she said her best friend Diane was badly sick and she would have to see her in a hospital during the weekend. Although I was a little disappointed, I tried to tell her that she was doing the right thing. In fact, Sarah is a nice girl and always kind towards people around her. I think she is the girl that I need to take care of. On my way home, I decided to go with her to see Diane and buy them some flowers.
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