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Nowadays more and more middle school students take their mobile phone to school
Our class had a discussion about whether we students should use a mobile phone in school.Some students think that they should.they say a mobile phone is It is convenient to communicate with their parents but l think it is not good for us because it can distract us So
in my opinion，we should not be allowed to take mobile because sometimes they listen music from their mobile phone and sometimes they play games . Do you think so？咳咳。。有点语法错误 这篇还可以吧

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还不错！！

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那请小主推了吧...

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能不能用上那些提示词和句型！老师要求，拜托改改 可以吗？还有，可以用几句话描述一下那幅图吗？

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Our class had a discussion about whether we students should use a mobile phone in school.About sixty-four percent students think that they should， they say a mobile phone is It is convenient to communicate with their parents. but thirty-six percent students think it is not good for us because they think it can distract us. In my opinion，we should not be allowed to take mobile because sometimes they listen music from their mobile phone and sometimes they play games . Do you think so？