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2016-05-11 · 繁杂信息太多,你要学会辨别
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  第二行
  unpleasantly改unpleasant
  failed改fail

  第五行
  bring改brings

  第六行
  Sometime改Sometimes
  第七行

  health改healthy
  第八行

  worse改better
  第十行

  the改a
  belonged改belonging
  第十一行
  删去by
  第十二行
  Living后加 with

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  Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.
Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.
In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love andfriendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.
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第三行 unpleasantly-unpleasant, failed-fail
第五行 bring-brings
第六行 Sometime-Sometimes
第七行 health-healthy
第八行 worse-better
第九行 yourself-you
第十行 the-a, belonged-belonging
第十二行 Living后加with
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eing grateful for what we have until we lose it, of not being conscious of health until we
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