Question

急，一直在线等！毕业论文摘要的英文翻译

之前的提问，由于时间关系，被一篇在线翻译浪费掉了100分。可惜&痛心！！！
不过论文的事情真的很着急啊，所以再次提问，恳请英语专业人士或英语爱好者浪费脑细胞，帮忙翻译一段论文的摘要。（其他朋友手下留情，别再粘贴那些无意义的在线翻译啦~）
翻译内容如下：
随着教育科技的飞速发展，人类越来越认识到智商(IQ)并不是决定成功的唯一要素。科学证明，情商(EQ)对于一个人的成功具有重要作用。
长期以来，我国应试教育的模式下存在着“重智商轻情商”的片面的教育观念，由此引发了学生的许多问题。越来越多的学生表现出脆弱、自私、冷漠、不自信，甚至有少数学生出现了自杀、犯罪等极端行为，我国学生的情商现状堪忧。
21世纪我国教育的主要任务是提高和促进人们素质的全面发展，素质教育的一项重要内容就是发展学生美好、积极的情感和塑造学生完美的人格。联合国教科文组织提出未来人才的三个标准即“学会学习”、“学会生存”、“学会合作”，其中“学会生存”、“学会合作”都包含着情商教育的内容。因此结合我国学生的情商现状及新世纪对人才的要求，情商教育已势在必行。
本论文建立在前人研究的基础之上，通过对情商及情商教育的相关文献和书籍进行整理、分析和反思，论述了情商的价值及情商教育的意义、重要性等方面的内容，并针对我国情商教育的现状，提出了改善方法和解决途径。
关键词：情商；情商教育；素质
拜托大家不要再把在线翻译的答案粘贴上来~~
我是要交毕业论文用的，所以要准确的。因为我是大学之后才接触英语的，所以水平太有限，还请能人帮忙！
分数已经追加了两次啦，还要恳请大家帮忙，谢谢！！！

Answer 1

我试试，有的地方稍微改动一点，但没有影响内容，不介意吧。

随着教育科技的飞速发展，人类越来越认识到智商(IQ)并不是决定成功的唯一要素。科学证明，情商(EQ)对于一个人的成功具有重要作用。

With the rapid developments in the field of education technology, more and more people began to notice that the Intelligence Quotient (IQ) is not the only factor determining one's level of success. It was proven scientifically that the Emotional Quotient (EQ) is vital to a person's success.

长期以来，我国应试教育的模式下存在着“重智商轻情商”的片面的教育观念，由此引发了学生的许多问题。越来越多的学生表现出脆弱、自私、冷漠、不自信，甚至有少数学生出现了自杀、犯罪等极端行为，我国学生的情商现状堪忧。

Our country's examination-based education system has always being suffering from the superficial doctrine of emphasizing too much on IQ and too little on EQ, which has caused many problems among students. More and more students began to show symptoms of mental weakness, selfishness, apathy and inconfidence. In some extreme cases these symptoms have resulted in suicides and crimes. The EQ situation of our nation's students is in need of immediate attention.

21世纪我国教育的主要任务是提高和促进人们素质的全面发展，素质教育的一项重要内容就是发展学生美好、积极的情感和塑造学生完美的人格。联合国教科文组织提出未来人才的三个标准即“学会学习”、“学会生存”、“学会合作”，其中“学会生存”、“学会合作”都包含着情商教育的内容。因此结合我国学生的情商现状及新世纪对人才的要求，情商教育已势在必行。

In the 21st Century, the primary goal of our nation's education system is to improve and to encourage the character cultivation of the people. One of the key element of character cultivation is to develop an upward, positive emotion and a perfect personality for the students. According to UNESCO, the three standards for a successful individual of the future are "Learn to cooperate; Learn to learn; Learn to survive", among which "learn to survive" and "learn to cooperate" contains the element of EQ education. Therefore, analyzing the current situation of our country's students and the upcoming demands of the new century, it seems that EQ education is absolutely essential.

本论文建立在前人研究的基础之上，通过对情商及情商教育的相关文献和书籍进行整理、分析和反思，论述了情商的价值及情商教育的意义、重要性等方面的内容，并针对我国情商教育的现状，提出了改善方法和解决途径。
关键词：情商；情商教育；素质

This thesis was written based on previous studies, after understanding and analyzing books and reference materials on EQ and EQ education. It discusses the value of EQ and the importance and meaning of EQ education, as well as offering a solution based on our country's current situation and education system.

Answer 2

终于翻完了，翻的比较粗糙，一些术语翻译的可能有失偏颇，一些细节还需要你自己改一下。

With the swift development of education science and technology, more and more people realized that IQ is not the only factor to decide the success.It is proved by science that EQ can make an important work to a person’s success.
For a long time, there’s an unilateral educational conception on the pattern of examination-oriented education system in our country which caused many problems among students. More and more students become frail, self-serving, apathy, unself-confidence, and even appear some extreme acts, such as suicide, commit a crime, and so on. The current situation on the students’ EQ in our country is worried.
In the 21st century , the main work of our country’s education is to improve and promote the people’s quality in all-round aspects. An essental aspect of education for all-round development is to cultivate the students to get nice and enterprising sentiment, and figure them to gain perfect personalities. The United Nations Educational, Scientific and Cultural Organization proposed that the three standards of the future people is study ability, survive ability and cooperation ability. The survive ability and cooperation ability contain EQ education. Therefore EQ education is to be imperative from the current situation on the EQ of our country’s students and the desire on the peple in the new centry.
This paper is based on the formers’ researches. It elaborated the value of EQ and discussed a significance of the EQ education through reorganize, analyse and reconsider the literature refer to EQ and EQ education, and aimed at the current situation on EQ education in our country to proposed the improvement method and the key to the situation
Key words: EQ, EQ education, quality

翻译仅供参考，祝你的论文能写作顺利:-)

Answer 3

Along with the amazing development speed in education science,more and more people contend that IQ is not the only way to success.Science has proved EQ take very crucial role in a person's success.
Ever since a long time, under the exam-oriented education system there really exist "make iq break eq" problem in this partial conception of education, which quotes many issues about students. a host of students display their aspect of frailly, selfish, alienation, unconfident, even for a few groups of students appear some phenomenas about suicide, the crime, extremely behavior.it is worth to worry about our students' eq position.
The 21st century,our country educates' primary mission is to enhance and promote the people quality and full scale development, one of the improtent content in quality educaion is to cultivate our students' goodliness and active emotion to figure out their perfect personality. the UNESCO proposed that in the future talented person's three standards“the academic society will study”, “the academic society survival”, “the academic society cooperation”, “the academic society survival”and “the academic society cooperation”,which all contain the factor about eq.
Therefore combining our country students' present situation and the new century to talented person's request,a request of cultivating EQ education is to be imperative.
This thesis establishs on the pass studies in the predecessor, through to the references about EQ and EQ education to analysis and the resonsideration, elaborated the value which discusses a request and discusses a request aspect and so on education significance, importance contents, and aims at our country to discuss a request the education present situation, proposed the improvement method and the key to deal with.

这都是我自己翻译的，也给你翻了20多分钟呢，我觉得你这不是很难的
就当帮你吧，你应该以别人的为参考，然后自己稍加修改

Answer 4

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Since long, under our country shopping online's pattern has “the heavy intelligence quotient discusses a request lightly” the one-sided education idea, from this has caused student's many questions. More and more students display frailly, selfish, indifferent, are not self-confident, even had the minority student to present the suicide, the crime and so on violent behavior, our country students has discussed a request the present situation to be worrying.
The 21st century our country educates the primary mission is enhances and promotes the people quality full scale development, an education for all-around development important content is develops the student happy, the positive emotion and molds the student perfect personality. The United Nations Educational, Scientific and Cultural Organization proposed that in the future talented person's three standards namely “the academic society will study”, “the academic society survival”, “the academic society cooperation”, “the academic society survival”, “the academic society cooperation” will contain is discussing a request the education content. Therefore unifies our country students to discuss a request the present situation and the new century to talented person's request, discusses a request the education to be imperative.
The present paper establishment studies in the predecessor above the foundation, through to discusses a request and discusses a request the education related literature and the books carries on the reorganization, the analysis and the resonsideration, elaborated the value which discusses a request and discusses a request aspect and so on education significance, importance contents, and aims at our country to discuss a request the education present situation, proposed the improvement method and the key to the situation.

情商；EQ
情商教育；EQ education
素质 Quality

Answer 5

Along with the education science's and technology's swift development, the humanity realized more and more decides the successful only essential factor to intelligence quotient (IQ). The science proved that discusses a request (EQ) to have the influential role regarding a person's success. since long, under our country shopping online's pattern has “the heavy intelligence quotient discusses a request lightly” the one-sided education idea, from this has caused student's many questions. More and more students display frailly, selfish, indifferent, are not self-confident, even had the minority student to present the suicide, the crime and so on violent behavior, our country students has discussed a request the present situation to be worrying. the 21st century our country educates the primary mission is enhances and promotes the people quality full scale development, an education for all-around development important content is develops the student happy, the positive emotion and molds the student perfect personality. The United Nations Educational, Scientific and Cultural Organization proposed that in the future talented person's three standards namely “the academic society will study”, “the academic society survival”, “the academic society cooperation”, “the academic society survival”, “the academic society cooperation” will contain is discussing a request the education content. Therefore unifies our country students to discuss a request the present situation and the new century to talented person's request, discusses a request the education to be imperative. the present paper establishment above the foundation which the predecessor studies, through to discusses a request and discusses a request the education related literature and the books carries on the reorganization, the analysis and the resonsideration, elaborated the value which discusses a request and discusses a request aspect and so on education significance, importance contents, and aims at our country to discuss a request the education present situation, proposed the improvement method and the key to the situation. key word: Discussing a request; Discusses a request the education; Quality