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求高手指点. 我知道漏洞很多，不过我是真心想学英语。 希望有人能帮忙，在下不胜感激。

求高手指点.
我知道漏洞很多，不过我是真心想学英语。
希望有人能帮忙，在下不胜感激。Tuesday March7,2017
The second practice test had finished,there are fifty grades between my grades with the frist-class university.The vast gap let me feel frightened.I remember I once said that either go to the frist-class university,or go to die.Now,should I wake in someway?In the next days, try my best to study and I will achieve my goal
Everything is possible ,I will use my sweat and blood to write my glory.

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我改了下，你可以参考。
March 7th, 2017 Tuesday Sunny
The second practice test has finished, there is a fifty grades' gap between my grades and the lowest criterion of examination of the frist-class university. The big gap lets me feel frightened. I remember that once I said "either went to the frist-class university, or went to die. ". Now, should I wake up in someway? In the following days, I will try my best to study and achieve my goal. Nothing is impossible, I will use my sweat and blood to write my honor.

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有几个疑问

1.那个either。。。or后面是要用过去时吗

我老师对我说我这种中式英语是不好的，我也不清楚。就比如最后一句，我感觉写的挺不错，不知道是不是有问题

最后一个，你觉得写作该怎么写，还有英语该怎么学。

谢谢