Question

写了一篇英语作文，那一位英语高手帮忙看一下有没有错的地方。谢谢！

My weekend
Today is my weekend. I’m very happy. In the morning, I will eat breakfast .My breakfast is bread and milk. After breakfast, I will do my homework and play computer games. In the afternoon, I am going to fishing with my Father. In the evening, I will eat dinner, and watch TV with my father and my mother.
Goodbye, I’m going to have breakfast.

Answer 1

因为不知道这位同学你是几年级，英语学到哪儿了。这边用的一般将来时乍一看有点问题，后来才发现是讲今天的打算。那最好能在开始的地方说明一下现在仍是早上，下面写都是我今天的计划。但这个我就先不给你改了。
改的几个地方是错误比较明显。
It's weekend today（你原来的表达太中国英语了）, so I'm very happy.
In the afternoon, I am going fishing （go fishing是固定搭配，去钓鱼）with my father（father为什么要大写？）.

In the evening, I will eat dinner and watch TV with mom and dad（这里倒不是错，这个表达更舒服）.

如上，望能采纳。

Answer 2

going to fishing---going fishing
是go fishing的用法，没有to

其他都没问题。

希望对你有帮助

Answer 3

My weekend
Today is my weekend. I’m very happy. In the morning, I will eat breakfast .My breakfast is bread and milk. After breakfast, I will do my homework and play computer games. In the afternoon, I am going to fishing with my Father. In the evening, I After dinner, and watch TV with my father and my mother.
Goodbye, I’m My weekend
我的周末
今天是我的周末。我确实非常高兴。在早上，我会吃早餐。早餐是面包和牛奶。早餐后，我会做作业和玩电脑游戏。在下午，我和爸爸去钓鱼。在晚上，我吃完饭后，和我父亲和我妈妈一起看电视。
再见，我的周末。
(给你改了下。)

Answer 4

my去掉，吃早餐是have breakfast，吃晚餐是have dinner，在in the afternoon，那儿going攻成will go，其它没错误