Question

英语作文，拜托好心人帮助

假如你是王平,你的一位美国网友Mary在你过生日时寄给你一个MP5播放器作为礼物，为此你写信向她表示感谢。信中要包含以下内容:
1.礼物很漂亮、实用、你很喜欢
2.它能帮你看英语视频，练习英语发音（pronunciatio）
3.询问他是否愿意暑假来中国旅游

Answer 1

Dear Mary,
Thanks for your Mp5.It's very beautiful and useful.I like it very much ! It can help me study English.I usually use it to watch English videos.I practice my pronunciation by this way ,and I have gotten progress.The summer holiday is coming ,would you like to come toChina for a travel?I will be very pleased to become you guide!
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Wang Ping

Answer 2

dear Mary
thanks for the gift! i simply love the MP5 you sent me. let me elucidate and you will find that your gift is a great help to me.
First and foremost, this MP5 is just gorgeous. It is also extremely useful and easy to carry. i could just put it in my pocket and walk around with it.
you may also have realized that i can not enunciate properly, so by giving me something loike that i could watch english videos and practice my pronunciations.
Now here's a question for you. i don't know if you are interested in coming to China for sight seeing this summer holiday, but i sincerely wish that you can be here.
thanks again!
sincerely
wang ping.

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追答

假如你是来自美国的爱德华,上周你在必有王丹的邀请下来到了北京。请根据下表中有关你这次旅行的信息，给她写一封信讲述这次旅行的感受并向她表示感谢。
The favorite place The Great Wall
People Nice and friendly
Food Delicious
要求1.语言通顺流畅
2.词数80次左右
dear wang Dan
thanks for the invitation and i had a nice time in beijing!
my favorite place would surely be the great wall. Its view is magnificent, and everything is wonderful there. After all it is famous, and this historical architecture is truely worth a visit;
the people in Beijing are nice and friendly. They never treat me as an outsider and are all very warm and welcoming. The food is also delicious, and everything is perfect
thanks again for the invitation
best regard,
Edward

Answer 3

Dear Mary
Yours parent very beauiteful,economic and Ilike very mach!It can help me to watch English videos, practice English pronunciation.I very thank you for my prasent.Are you willing to summer tour in China?
Wang ping