Question

作文：用英语描述你最喜欢的地方

比如是公园、家里、动物园、社区、学校、图书室等。
六下的，尽量写得稍微简单一些（我说单词，也尽量能让人一眼看的明白）
急，要快！！！！come on！！！！！！
很急啊，今晚就得交啊，请各位大哥大姐帮帮忙吧！！！！！！！！！！！！
跪求啊。，挺简单了，我就是不知道作文里面该提点什么，又怕写错了，快点啊，实在是十分火急啊！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！
快啊！！！！!！！！！！！！！！！！！难道这个题不简单吗？我感觉比我大一级的就能写出来哎，就快点吧！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！求求你们了

Answer 1

My Favourite Place—the Pearl River

Different people like different places. My favourite place is the Pearl River. Because the Pearl River is beautiful.

In the morning, the trees and the flowers beside the river are interesting. They dance like lovely girls in the wind. They attract many butterflies and bees. The bees and the butterflies always sing and dance in the flowers.It’s just a beautiful picture!

In the evening, many people go for a walk near the river after dinner. Some of them go there and run, some of them gocyclingnear the beautiful river. In summer evenings, the wind is so cool and soft. It’s really a good place to run away from the hot summer!

You can also see many beautiful ships and some little boats. There are many big trees near the riverbank. The water in the river is clear. There are many fish dancing in the water. What’s your favourite place？

追问

看不大懂唉，我才六年级，写一些比较简单的就可以了，15个句子左右就够我用的了，请在改善一下，40分可不是白给的哦，可是有要求di

追答

天啊！已经很简单了。怎么改啊，描述也要一些单词的。已经是找最简单的语言了。

唉！算了，再来一个吧，看看这个可不可以。

My favourite place

My favourite is the sea.

Whenever
I feel sad or happy. I would go to see the sea. Because I would
like to ask the sea to share my happiness or sadness.

When I
feel sad. The sun wasn’ t in the sky, and the sky was so gray, and my
legs were very heavy. At that time, I would go to see the sea. The
waves are talking and giving ideas for me. The sea would be a good
listener and listen to me carefully. My sadness went away quickly. S
o, I thought the sea is wonderful.

When I feel happy. I would
go to see the sea. But, only at night. Why? Because I can see so many
stars and a bright moon in the sky. T he waves are singing and dancing
for me. At that time, I thought the sea is
the most beautiful.

The sea is my best friend, my favourite place forever!

追问

你写在公园里哪里的不行吗，比如我最喜欢的地方是动物园了，动物园里怎么样怎么样的，你写的这个地方我都不知道是哪里，我只是不知道写这种作文的几个要点，你也可以给我写几条重点，介绍他的什么也行。

追答

要不你写中文，我给你翻译。

要点：

• 首先扣题，说明我最喜欢的地方是动物园。

• 介绍为什么喜欢。

• 最后总结
  

追问

我就是不知道这种作文的要领啊。给我提几条重点的写法也行

追答

不是给你了吗，第一句先写我最喜欢的地方是哪，然后写为什么喜欢。最后总结一下例如写所以动物园是我最喜欢的地方。