Question

一个英语文章

After graduating from school, I
didn’t
go directly to university. Instead, I spent a year
travelling round the world.

I started my trip in London, the UK. I saw the Big Ben and visited the amazing churches. From
there, I flew to Paris, and went down to the south of France, which is famous for its lovely
beaches.

Next, I flew to India, and traveled round the country for about three months. Although the
cities were crowded, the countryside was the beautiful. I stayed in a small fishing village by the
sea and it was the happiest time of my life.

I then came to China, a country I had always wanted to visit. I saw Beijing, of course, and
climbed up the Great Wall. I also took a trip to see some villages where I learned a lot about
Chinese local customs.

Then, at last, I flew all the way home. It had been a great experience, but, yes, it was good to
be home again!

Answer 1

我从学校毕业以后，没有直接上大学。取而代之，我花了一年的时间周游世界。我从英国伦敦开始了我的旅行。我参观了大本钟和一些令人惊异的教堂。我从伦敦坐飞机到大连巴黎，然后南下去法国以可爱沙滩闻名的的南部。然后，我飞往印度，在那个国家旅行了三个月。尽管那里的城市很拥挤，但是却很美丽。我住在海边的一个渔村里，那是我这一生中最幸福的时刻。然后我去了梦寐以求的中国。我拜访了北京，当然，我去爬长城了。我还去了一些小村庄，在那里我学到了一些中国当地的习俗。最后，我乘飞机返回家乡。这是一次很棒的经历，但是，回到家的感觉很棒！

追问

这个准么？

追答

我自己翻译的，就是这个意思，可能语言不够优美>-<

追问

那我就采纳你了

追答

谢谢！！

Answer 2

从高中毕业后，我没有直接去念大学，相反的我花了一年的时间环游世界。我从英国伦敦开始我的旅行，我看到了大本钟和参观了许多惊人的教堂。从伦敦我飞到了巴黎，直接去了以浪漫沙滩闻名的法国南部。下一个地方我去了印度，在那里游玩了三个月。虽然城市拥挤，但乡村很美。我留在一个小的临海的渔村，在那度过了我人生中最幸福的时间。然后我去了一个我一直想去的中国。我看到了北京。当然我也攀登了万里长城，我还去了许多中国村子学到许多中国传统习俗。最后我回到了家，这是一个很好地经历，但是还是家里好。