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DearEditor,IusedtobeingahappylittlegirlbutnowIamshy1._______andsayafewwords.WhenIwase...
Dear Editor,
I used to being a happy little girl but now I am shy 1._______
and say a few words. When I was eleven.I lost one 2._______
of the front teeth and it replaced by a false one.3._______
No one knows about it except two of my friends. 4._______
However,I find that it hard to face them because 5._______
they know my secret.When I spoke to them,they 6._______
often stare at my mouth,what makes me feel 7._______
uncomfortable. I am afraid of making new friend as I 8._______
think they will laugh at me.Sometime I even 9._______
want to kill me indeed.What should I do? 10._______
Yours,
Lily
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I used to being a happy little girl but now I am shy 1._______
and say a few words. When I was eleven.I lost one 2._______
of the front teeth and it replaced by a false one.3._______
No one knows about it except two of my friends. 4._______
However,I find that it hard to face them because 5._______
they know my secret.When I spoke to them,they 6._______
often stare at my mouth,what makes me feel 7._______
uncomfortable. I am afraid of making new friend as I 8._______
think they will laugh at me.Sometime I even 9._______
want to kill me indeed.What should I do? 10._______
Yours,
Lily
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Dear Editor,
I used to being a happy little girl but now I am shy 1.____being改成be___
and say a few words. When I was eleven.I lost one 2._______去掉这行的a____
of the front teeth and it replaced by a false one. 3.____正确___
No one knows about it except two of my friends. 4.__去掉about_____
However,I find that it hard to face them because 5.__it后加is_____
they know my secret.When I spoke to them,they 6.__spoke改成speak_____
often stare at my mouth,what makes me feel 7.__what改成which_____
uncomfortable. I am afraid of making new friend as I 8.__friend换成复数friends___
think they will laugh at me.Sometime I even 9.__sometime换成sometimes_____
want to kill me indeed.What should I do? 10.__me换成myself_____
参考解答:1.used to be 是个固定搭配,意思是:曾经是;used to do something 过去常常
2.文章的本义应该是:很少讲话,用few
4.know后面可直接跟宾语,不须用about
5.I find that 后应该接一个句子,所以it后要加is.另一种改法:去掉that,用法是find+宾语+宾补
6.文章的时态为一般现在时,不应该用过去时的spoke,而应该用它的原形speak
7.which 引导非限定性定语从句,它代表前一句的意思
8.friend应该用复数
9.sometime不用于句首,一般用时句中,sometimes可用于句首或句尾
10.应该是kill myself,即“杀我自己”
I used to being a happy little girl but now I am shy 1.____being改成be___
and say a few words. When I was eleven.I lost one 2._______去掉这行的a____
of the front teeth and it replaced by a false one. 3.____正确___
No one knows about it except two of my friends. 4.__去掉about_____
However,I find that it hard to face them because 5.__it后加is_____
they know my secret.When I spoke to them,they 6.__spoke改成speak_____
often stare at my mouth,what makes me feel 7.__what改成which_____
uncomfortable. I am afraid of making new friend as I 8.__friend换成复数friends___
think they will laugh at me.Sometime I even 9.__sometime换成sometimes_____
want to kill me indeed.What should I do? 10.__me换成myself_____
参考解答:1.used to be 是个固定搭配,意思是:曾经是;used to do something 过去常常
2.文章的本义应该是:很少讲话,用few
4.know后面可直接跟宾语,不须用about
5.I find that 后应该接一个句子,所以it后要加is.另一种改法:去掉that,用法是find+宾语+宾补
6.文章的时态为一般现在时,不应该用过去时的spoke,而应该用它的原形speak
7.which 引导非限定性定语从句,它代表前一句的意思
8.friend应该用复数
9.sometime不用于句首,一般用时句中,sometimes可用于句首或句尾
10.应该是kill myself,即“杀我自己”
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being--be used to do sth.曾经。。。
a few--few 很少说话
it replaced--it was replaced 表被动
knows about--knows 可直接跟宾语
find that it--find it find it+adj.+to do sth.
spoke--speak 时态一致
what--which 引导非限制性定语从句
friend--friends 泛指
sometime--sometimes 有时
me--myself kill oneself自杀
a few--few 很少说话
it replaced--it was replaced 表被动
knows about--knows 可直接跟宾语
find that it--find it find it+adj.+to do sth.
spoke--speak 时态一致
what--which 引导非限制性定语从句
friend--friends 泛指
sometime--sometimes 有时
me--myself kill oneself自杀
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being--be
a few 去掉a
replaced前加was
knows-know
find that it 去掉that
spoke-speak
what-that
a few 去掉a
replaced前加was
knows-know
find that it 去掉that
spoke-speak
what-that
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being变为be
去掉a
was replacedwas
knows变为know
that 去掉that
spoke变为speak
what变为that
去掉a
was replacedwas
knows变为know
that 去掉that
spoke变为speak
what变为that
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