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英语作文改错

I'm quite familiar your situation.As computers become more and more popular, some students cannot help playing online games and chatting. It was not only a problem of wasting time,but aseriously problem for their future!What you should do first is find out what make her addicted to computer games.Lack of love from parents?Poor scoress?Then having heart-to-heart talk with her.Second,you should help her with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it .Finally,to find something else for her to do instead of computer games .Your efforts will surely help change his life

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I'm quite familiar (with) your situation. As computers (are) becom(ing) more and more (efficient), students cannot help (themselves) playing online games and chatting (inordinately). It (does) not only (waste) (their) (time), (but) (more) (importantly), (it) (will) (damage) their future. What you should do first is find out what ma(d)e her addicted to computer games. (Is) (it) lack(ing) of love from parents? (Or) (is) (it) (her) poor (marks) (that) (made) (her) (like) (this)? Then give (her) (a) heart-to-heart talk. (Also), you should help her with her study, (support) (her) to build up confidence and make her interest(ed) in (school) (work). Lastly, find something else (fun) for her to do instead of computer games. (I) (believe) (that) your efforts will surely help chang(ing) her life.