Question

求2011年陕西高考短文改错的详细解析，最好是把为什么要这么改的原因说出来，谢谢了T-T

Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. I didn't have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn't be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building. He was right there in the front of me! I
couldn't believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!

make- making
actor- actors
but- so/and
get
∧
- it
have- had
everywhere-anywhere
disappointing- disapointed
walk out
∧
- of
in the front of
去掉
the
had- have
ake- making
actor- actors
but- so/and
get∧- it
have- had
everywhere-anywhere
disappointing- disapointed
walk out∧- of
in the front of去掉the
had- have

Answer 1

1.make- making (现在分词做定语修饰a crew )
2.actor- actors (one of +名词复数,表示很多当中的一个)
3.but- so/and (作者随身没带照相机,所以(so)要回家去取.表示因果关系或递进关系.故but改成so/and )
4.get∧- it(get是及物动词,后面必须带宾语.it指代my camera )
5.have- had("回来"got back用的过去式,在此之前就已经拍完了那个场景.因此finish应该用过去完成时.故将have改成 had)

6.everywhere-anywhere (anywhere用于否定句中, not...anywhere不是任何地方)
7.disappointing- disappointed(说明人"感到失望"用disappointed;说明某事物"令人失望"用disappointing;此句的主语为人.故用disappointed)
8.walk out∧- of (walk out of 是一个固定的短语,意思是"从...走出来",故加上of)
9.in the front of去掉the (in the front of 指"在某一范围内的前部",in front of指"A在B的前面",此句指"在我的前面,在我的面前",故去掉the)
10.had- have (前面用了助动词did,那么后面的动词就必须用原形)

追问

谢谢，能不能再帮我翻译一下文章，因为明天要讲解这篇- -

追答

上周日早晨,当我正在我家附近的公园里散步时,我遇见了一个摄制组,正在拍一部有我最喜欢的一个演员参演的新片。当时，我随身没带照相机，因此，我飞奔回家去取照相机。不幸的是，当我返回时，他们已经拍完了那个场景，并且在任何地方都没看到那个演员。我真的很失望，正要离开，这时，他从一幢楼房里走出来。他就在那儿，在我的面前。我简直不能相信自己的运气--我不但有了跟他的合影照，而且他还在我的衬衫上签上了他的名字。