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JaneandJakearehighschoolstudents.Bothofthemworkhardbuttheyhavedifferentlearningmethod...
Jane and Jake are high school students.Both of them work hard but they have different learning method.Jane listens to her teachers attentively and make notes carefully,trying to catch everything the teachers saying in calss.She often asks her teachers question if she felt puzzled.So she spends little time on her homework than others.It's certain she can go to bed earlier,so she always keep energetically in the day.However,Jake like to stay up late at night doing his homework,so he often falls sleepy in class.As consequence of this,he misses lots key points and it usually take up him more time to finish his homework.It is difficult of him to manage his study.这是英语的短文改错,看在我打的不容易的份儿上,快快把答案发过来吧!急急急!
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1. 2行第一个单词 method 改为 methods
2. 2行第九个单词 make 改为 makes
3. 3行倒数第五个单词 felt 改为 feels
4. 4行第一个单词 little 改为 less
5. 4行最后一个单词 keep 改为 keeps (这里怀疑是你打错了)
6. 5行第一个单词 energetically 改为 energetic
7. 5行第七个单词 like 改为 likes (你还是打错了吗 ?)
8. 6行第二个单词 sleepy 改为 asleep
9. 6行第五个单词 as 改为 in
10.6行第十一个单词 lots 后面加上 of
11.6行倒数第三个单词 take 改为 takes 同时去掉 up (你是不是又打错了)
12.7行倒数第七个单词 of 改为 for
关于谓语动词的错误出现了3次, 你应该是打错了2次的
2. 2行第九个单词 make 改为 makes
3. 3行倒数第五个单词 felt 改为 feels
4. 4行第一个单词 little 改为 less
5. 4行最后一个单词 keep 改为 keeps (这里怀疑是你打错了)
6. 5行第一个单词 energetically 改为 energetic
7. 5行第七个单词 like 改为 likes (你还是打错了吗 ?)
8. 6行第二个单词 sleepy 改为 asleep
9. 6行第五个单词 as 改为 in
10.6行第十一个单词 lots 后面加上 of
11.6行倒数第三个单词 take 改为 takes 同时去掉 up (你是不是又打错了)
12.7行倒数第七个单词 of 改为 for
关于谓语动词的错误出现了3次, 你应该是打错了2次的
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Jane and Jake are high school students.Both of them work hard but they have different learning methods.Jane follows her teachers' advice attentively and makes notes carefully,trys to catch everything the teachers have said in calss.She often asks her teachers questions if she felt puzzled.So she spends less time on her homework than others.It's sure that she (should) go to bed earlier,in order to keep spirited in the day.However,Jake likes to stay up at night,so he often falls sleepy in class.As a consequence of this,he misses lots of key points in the courses and usually need to take up more time to finish his homework.It is really difficult for him to manage his study well.
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1Jane listens to her teachers attentively and makes notes carefully,
2.try to catch everything the teachers saying in calss.
3.She often asks her teachers questions if she feels puzzled.
4.So she spends less time on her homework than others.
5.so she always keep energetic in the day.
6.However,Jake likes to stay up late at night to do his homework,so he often falls asleep in class.
7.As consequence of this,he misses lots of key points and it usually takes up him more time to finish his homework.
8.It is difficult for him to manage his study.
每一条里都有错,我已经改过来了,你自己看吧。
2.try to catch everything the teachers saying in calss.
3.She often asks her teachers questions if she feels puzzled.
4.So she spends less time on her homework than others.
5.so she always keep energetic in the day.
6.However,Jake likes to stay up late at night to do his homework,so he often falls asleep in class.
7.As consequence of this,he misses lots of key points and it usually takes up him more time to finish his homework.
8.It is difficult for him to manage his study.
每一条里都有错,我已经改过来了,你自己看吧。
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珍妮和杰克是高中学生。两人工作都很努力,但他们有不同的学习方法。简听她的老师用心,认真记笔记,试图抓住一切老师说在属性。她经常问老师问题如果她感到困惑。所以她花了一点点时间在她的家庭作业比别人。她确实可以去早睡,所以她总是保持积极的一天。然而,杰克喜欢熬夜做作业,因此他经常落沉睡在cl
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1but改为and 2make 改为makes 3question改为questions 4little改为less 5energetically改为energetical 6like改为 likes 7sleepy改为asleep 8lots加of 9take改为takes
10 of 改为for
10 of 改为for
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