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刚写的雅思考试作文，希望英语好的大神给点指导建议！！

Answer 1

Do you think that regular exercise is important
Every Wednesday is Tip Day.
This Wednesday: 12 tips for getting regular exercise — and the benefits.
Exercise is a KEY to happiness. Research shows that people who exercise are healthier, more energetic, think more clearly, sleep better, and have delayed onset of dementia. They get relief from anxiety and mild depression. Theyperform better at work.
Also, although it’s tempting to flop down on the couch when you’re feeling exhausted, exercise is actually a great way to boost energy levels. Feeling tired is a reason to exercise, not a reason to skipexercise.
But even when you admit that you’d feel better if you exercised, it can be very hard to adopt the habit. My idea of fun has always been to lie in bed, reading, preferably while also eating a snack – but I’ve managed to keep myself exercising over the years by using all these tricks on myself:
1. Always exercise on Monday. This sets the psychological pattern for the week. Along the same lines…
2. If at all possible, exercise first thing in the morning. As the day wears on, you’ll find more excuses to skip exercising. Get it checked off your list, first thing. It’s also a very nice way to start the day; even if nothing else goes right, you’ve accomplished that.
3. Never skip exercising for two days in a row. You can skip a day, but the next day, you must exercise, no matter how inconvenient. (Lately, I haven’t been following this rule, and it has really affected my rou

Answer 2

洛阳大华雅思提醒您，建议您

1. 多看一些原版英文读物，文章里面很多用法不够地道

2. 提高词汇量，用词会有更多选择

3. 多用长句，可以加分
   

Answer 3

本文写作逻辑合理，但缺乏必要的关联体系。
常见语法错误比较多，论证不是很给力。
综合雅思得分5-5.5分

Answer 4

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第一段是人家出的题目第二段开始是我写的… if I were 那句应该是对过去的虚拟啊因为我已经上大学了，虚拟我没上的话应该用were过去式，highly likely的用法是对的你可以百度一下，后面时态前后不一致确实是我错了，连词和没加s也是我的错

最后not only 我是想用although来着… 写到最后实在太困就写错了不好意思……

谢谢你啦这么耐心的看完还给我指出错！我都记住了会改正的～

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你是外院的学生吗？我大三了在准备雅思，有兴趣的剧可以加个微信互相切磋下英语～ 虽然我知道我的水平肯定没你高～

这是我的微信号，不加也没关系还是很感谢你～ thank u～

R-969706985… 复制一下搜索就可以，后面的是我的QQ号…