Question

英语短文改错(共10个错误)Thanks a lot for your letter and I

英语短文改错(共10个错误)Thanks a lot for your letter and I am happy to be your friend.
Here are some things about myself. My favorite subject are computer studies too. I like computer games, especial action games. You are very lucky to have a PC at home. I wish I can have one, too! My mother thinks it is too expensive, so I have to play computer games at my friend home.
Beside that, I also like to listen to music during our spare time. My brother works in music store for I have lots of free CDs. My favorite band is “Black Eyed Peas”. Do you have a favorite band or singers?
It was great to hear from you, Joseph. I hope you’ll write again soon and to tell me about yourself.
Best wishes,
Kim

Answer 1

改错如下：

Thanks a lot for your letter and I am happy to be your friend.
Here are some things about myself. My favorite subject (are改成is) computer studies too. I like computer games, (especial改成especially) action games. You are very lucky to have a PC at home. I wish I (can 改成could) have one, too! My mother thinks it is too expensive, so I have to play computer games at my (friend改成friend's) home.
(Beside改成Besides) that, I also like to listen to music during (our改成my) spare time. My brother works in (加入a) music store (for改成so) I have lots of free CDs. My favorite band is “Black Eyed Peas”. Do you have a favorite band or (singers改成singer)?
It (was改成is) great to hear from you, Joseph. I hope you’ll write again soon and (去掉to) tell me about yourself.
Best wishes,
Kim

追答

singers 改成 singer
这个改错取消

总共十处错误，保证准确率！

Answer 2

Myself改成me，subject后面的are改成is,把especial改为especially,Beside改为Besides,listen to后面加the,our spare time改为my spare time,brother改为brother's,works改为work,singers改为singer,去掉and后面的to,

追答

不一定全对，仅供参考

Answer 3

fe. But those who have never suffered impairment of sight or hearing seldom make the

Answer 4

1. Subject are : subject is
2. Especial : especially
3. I wish I can : I wish I could
4. My friend home : my friend's home
5. Our spare time : my spare time
6. Store for : store so
7. Or singers : or singer
8. And to tell : and tell
9. In music : in a music
10. It was : it is