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Time passed quickly. I went to college where I'm always dreaming of place this year. After enter

Time passed quickly. I went to college where I'm always dreaming of place this year. After entering the university, I'm surprised to find that the university is exceedingly different from the high school. It makes me have more time to do what I want to do. However, it is a challenge for me to arrange my study time as well as my fun time. Therefore, it is necessary for me to learn how to tackle out it.
As far as I'm concerned, I hold the view that study and play are equally important. First, in our studies, we can't miss our class. Not going to class will miss an army of valuable information. As the proverb goes: I find that the harder I work, the more luck I seem to have. Second, of course, we also need some fun to make ourselves relax and reduce the stress. Play can make study better.
Last, taking into account all the above factors, study should combine with play. We just arrange study and play well, can we have a better life.帮我改下作文 主要是把句子换成从句

Answer 1

Time passed quickly. I enter the college where I always dream of the place this year. After entering the university, I'm surprised to find that the university life is exceedingly different from that in the high school. It makes me have more time to do what I want to do. However, it is a challenge for me to arrange my study time as well as my fun time. Therefore, it is necessary for me to learn how to tackle out it.
As far as I'm concerned, I hold the view that study is more important than playing. First, in our studies, we can't miss our class. Missing class will miss a lot of valuable information. As the proverb goes: I find that the harder I work, the more luck I seem to have. Second, of course, we also need some fun to make ourselves relax and reduce the stress. Playing can make my study and body better.Last, taking into account all the above factors, study should combine with playing. Just arrange study and playing well, we can have a better life。
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Answer 2

　　With time passing by quickly, I was able to enter the college I had always been dreamed of this year. I was surprised to find that university is rather different from high school, for it allows me much time to do whatever I like to, but such freedom is also a challenge for me to balance between schoolwork and having fun. Therefore,

　　it is necessary for me to learn how to balance.
As far as I'm concerned, I hold the view that study and play are equally important. First, in our studies, we can't miss our class. Not going to class will make me miss an army of valuable information. As the proverb goes: I find that the harder I work, the more luck I seem to have. Second, of course, we also need some fun to relax ourselves and reduce the stress. Play can make study better.
Last, taking into account all the above factors, I think study should be combined with play. Only by arranging study and play well, can we have a better college life.

Answer 3

I went to college [where--which] I'm always dreaming of [去掉place }this year

from the high school，[which] makes me have more time to do what I want to do

we can't miss our[ class--classes]

make ourselves [relax--relaxed]

Only when we just arrange study and play well can we have a better life.