Question

英语牛人帮我看一句话！！！麻烦了！！

成绩单上的一句话，这句话有没有什么问题？合格吗？
补充一下，是senior grade two

Answer 1

兹证明彼得，男，生于1996.2.14.，自从2011.9.在长沙xxx学校学习，现在高小六年级16班读书，他的学号见下：

now 后面错了，应改为：now study in class 16 of grade 6 of our school。其他没错。

Answer 2

似乎语序有点问题，这类似于法律文书，最好严谨写。这里有个样本你参考下：
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学习成绩证明书

Answer 3

This is to certify that Peter, male, born on February 14th, 1996, has been studying in XXX School of Changsha since September 2011 and is a student of senior Grade Two in Class No.16 right now. Here're some academic records of his as follows:
仅供参考，望能帮助到你，呵呵！

Answer 4

翻译过来是， 彼得，男，出生于1996年2月14日，从2011年9月在长沙XXX学校学习，目前是在我校高二16班在读，以下是他的学业分数：

Answer 5

this is to certify that peter, male, born on February 14th, 1996, studies in XXX school of Changsha since September 2011, now senior grade in my school 16 class reading. His academic record is as follow:
更改如下:
This is the certification of the academic record to peter ( male, born on February 14th, 1996, studies in XXX school of Changsha since September 2011, now reading in my school 16 class senior garde two.)His academic record is as follow:

Answer 6

This is to certify,(that 去掉)
now senior grade in my school 16 class reading. 这句好像是病句。想表达什么内容？在某校几年几班学习吗？