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I am the monitor of our classes.Several days ago,I helped my teacher arrange the class trip to a sculpture park.We visit the sculpture park before the trip to note anything what may cause accidents.By doing so,my teacher and I knew what to expect and felt full prepared.There was 40students take the trip.My teacher and Idivided them groups of four,each group having one students in charge.The trip were really great-everyone came back happy and exciting.Although tired,but I felt very proud that

Answer 1

I am the monitor of our classes. Serveral days ago, I helped my teacher arrange the class trip to a scuplture park. We visited the sculpture park before the trip to note anything that may cause accidents. By doing so, my teacher and I knew what to expect and felt fully prepared.There were 40 students took the trip. My teacher and I devided them into groups of four, each group having one student in charge. The trip was really great-everyone came back happy and excited. Although tired, I felt very proud of that.

visit--> visited 过去发生的，应为过去时

what--> that 已有anything就不应该用what
full--> fully 修饰prepared，应使用副词
was--> were 学生可数名词，应用复数
take--> took 过去时，应使用过去分词
devided them groups.. --> devided them into devide...into... 固定搭配，把..分成..
were--> was trip 为单数

exciting--> excited excited形容人，exciting形容东西。这里指学生，所以永excited
but--> 去掉 although和but不能一起用。只能单独用
proud--> proud of pround of ... 固定搭配，对...感到自豪

Answer 2

outh is not a time of life; it is a state of mind; it is not a matter of rosy cheeks, red lip