Question

求高手修改英语作文！！！

Today，I gotup at seven‘o clock.At first ,I brushed myteeth and washed my face.Then,I ate bread and drank a bottle of milk as mybreakfast.Finally,I wrote my biology homework. After dinner.My fatherand I go to the gym.And ran two rounds the gym.Then, we played tennis the pasthour. I feel very happy.

Answer 1

时间上过渡性有点大，而且过去式运用不到位。应该是 My father and I went to the gym,and ran two rounds around the gym. Then,we played tennis the next hour. I felt verry happy.不知道对你有没有帮助，加油哦！

Answer 2

第二行as应该改为for吧，as不顺眼。。。。那个finally可不可以改成after that？

第三行go改为went ,And后加we，两处the前面加in。
其实你的today是什么意思？是指当写日记一样叙述今天发生的事情还是什么。。。

追问

写日记

追答

we played tennis the pasthour改为we spent half an hour in playing tennis
是不是表示用了一个半小时打乒乓球？这样表达更好一些
球采纳谢谢

Answer 3

as改为for，my breakfast 去掉my，wrote 改为did，go to the gym 中 go改为went，ran two rounds in the gym，把 the pasthour 去掉，可写成we played tennis there。i felt very happy