Question

李华暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职 已写好申请书和个人简历，，怎么帮她修改？

Answer 1

Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.
Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.
Yours,
Li Hua

格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。要注意书信格式，包括称呼语，正文以及结束语等。可以先列出要点而且注意将来时现在时和现在完成时的交错使用，语气要委婉礼貌。

申请书和个人简历写的方式：

1，问好；

2，说明写信的原因，提出请求；

3，说明回信时间；

4，表达感谢。