Question

一道英语改错题

Answer 1

When
I
was
in
Grade
4,my
father
hired
()
Ziba
to
help
around
the
house.(She)
had
a
sister.Since
Ziba
was
uneducated,she
would
ask
me
(to)
write
her
sister
letters
sometimes.One
day,I
asked
her
(whether或if)
she’d
like
to
learn
to
read
and
write.
She
gave
me
(a)
very
big
smile
(and)
said
she’d
like
that
very
much.
So
we’d
sit
at
the
kitchen
table
after
I
(had)
finished
my
own
schoolwork
and
I’d
(teach)
her
letters
and
words.She
(started)
calling
me
Teacher
Soraya.
The
(first)
time
Ziba
wrote
her
own
letter,I
knew
I
wanted
to
be
a
teacher.
1.hire为及物动词，后面直接加宾语，不用of
2.由后文知Ziba是女的，故He
改为
She
3.ask
sb
to
do
4.问她是否想学读和写，不是想读什么，写什么
5.“给了我一个大大的微笑”
6.表示并列，并无转折
7.这个比较可疑，不过finished是发生在sit之前的，用过去完成时为好。我在想楼主说10个错误是什么意思。如果说是要改10处，应该改这个;如果说改九处，有一处打钩，这个就不用改了。
8.这里的I'd与前面一句的We'd一样，都是I
would的缩写，表示过去常常……故后面应接动词原形
9.“开始”这一动作发生在过去，用过去时
10.应该要说的是“Ziba第一次写信时”吧，不是最后一次。The
first
time可以引导时间状语从句的，故不用再加when
楼上的，help
around
the
house可以的，不信你google搜搜看

Answer 2

from的宾语是定语从句中的关系代词that，而the
place只是个先行词，不属于定语从句的成分

Answer 3

这里用true的意思并没错，只是形式错了。true意为“真正地”，当然really也有这个意思，但是此处考的不是truely和really的意义区别，考点是词性，true是形容词，修饰形容词sorry应该用副词，所以用truely。当然改成really本身是没错的，但是英语改错当中改得越少越好，很少有需要换词的，一般是词的用法有误或形式不对，只要能用原来的词就不要换。

Answer 4

Like
most
of
my
schoolmates,I
have
neither
brothers
nor
sisters----in
any
(remove
any)
other
words,I
am
an
(an
replaced
by
the)
only
child.My
parents
love
me
dear
(dearly)
of
course
and
will
do
all
they
can
(to)
make
sure
that
I
get
a
good
education.They
did
(do)
not
want
me
to
do
any
work
at
family
(home);they
want
me
to
devote
all
my
time
to
my
studies
so
that
I’ll
get
good
marks
in
all
my
subject
(subjects).We
may
be
one
family
and
live
under
a
(the)
same
roof,but
we
do
not
seem
to
get
much
time
to
talk
about
(things)
together.It
looks
as
if
my
parents
treat
(treated)
me
as
a
visitor
and
(or)
a
guest.Do
they
really
understand
their
own
daughter?What
things
are
(How
are
things)
in
other
families,I
wonder