Question

自己写了一个英语句子，请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没。或者有什么更好的表达方式。谢谢了~~

Do you believe true love
I really believe true love When I was young, and I deeply believe anyone who told me anything. but as time goes by I have gone through a lot of pain things, I found my childhood was too young, too naïve. Now, my point is the world don’t have true love except your parents’

Answer 1

死板的翻译答案是这样的：你相信真正的等真的相信真爱当我年轻的时候,我深深相信任何人告诉我任何事情。但随着时间的推移,我经历了很多痛苦的事情,我发现我的童年是太年轻,太幼稚。现在,我的观点是世界上没有真爱除了你的父母

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Answer 2

最后一句可能改成there isnt true love in the world except your parents' 比较恰当

Answer 3

1、and连接句子前面就别加，了
2、but首字母大写
3、as the time went by 才能跟后面的时态对上

追问

I really believe true love When I was young, and I deeply believe anyone who told me anything.可以改成 i realy believe true love when i was young and anyone who told me anyting吗？？

Answer 4

when 应该小写