Question

求关于登山活动的英语作文

星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：
1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）；
2. 活动的过程；
3. 你对于这次活动的评论。
注意： 1. 词数120左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
（要自己写的，差点没关系，要简单点的，网上答案不采纳）

Answer 1

In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.

It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. Al the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.

The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time .

我写的

你自己借鉴点吧

算了，告诉您，其实是参考答案。

你把一些单词改成同义词，一些复杂的句型改下，也行

Answer 2

In order to encourage the students t o take outdoor exercise, our school orga nized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.

It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we ga thered at the foot of Daqing Moutain an d set out for the top in high spirits. All th e way we were chatting, singing and lau ghing, enjoying the fresh air and the bea utiful scenery. When some fell behind, o thers would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bat hed in sunshine, we jumped and cheere d with joy.

The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and giv e us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among u s. What a wonderful time!