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希望能专业英语帮忙翻译这篇文章！

知道网友你好！我现在急切的需要你的帮助。我和我老婆打算本月18号赴欧洲旅行，可是前天（7月12号）我们却收到了法国领事馆的拒签函，弄的我们相当的郁闷。我们找的国旅，他们说可以写申诉信。因为我的英文10多年度没有碰过了，故请你帮我翻译和润色一下我的申诉信。感谢支持，面对不公正待遇，我们会争取每个申诉的机会的。悬赏分我将提升至我最高极限！

尊敬的签证官阁下：

您好！感谢您于百忙中阅读我的来信。我的英文不好，但由于时间紧急，我不得不自己来信这封信。我叫XXX，我和我妻子于6月21日在国旅签订了7月18号赴欧洲旅游的计划，7月12号我们被告知护照（签证申请号：00000000）被拒签，理由如下：“8、您提供的关于旅行目的和在申根国逗留条件方面信息可信度不高” 。收到此函时，我们感到沮丧不已，甚至，坦白说，觉得感情上受到了伤害。作为一个受过良好教育、有正当职业的中国公民，我们只不过是希望能够趁着今年来之不易的假期一偿心愿，到法国及其他欧洲国家进行旅游。我强烈的认为你们对我们的拒签是不合理的，有以下几点原因：
一、在旅游目的方面，我们多年来就钟情于欧洲各国极其丰富的文化底蕴以及各旅游地区的秀丽的自然风光及民族风情。早在2005年我就购买了我现在的住房，小区的名字就叫普罗旺斯（地址：四川成都金牛区蜀跃路6号），那时我就答应过妻子一定要和她一起到法国去看看真正的普罗旺斯，看看那美丽的薰衣草花田，但相当遗憾，至今才得以付诸行动，这在我心中一直觉得内疚。另外我2000年大学毕业后就一直在从事建筑设计行业，我对建筑设计有着浓厚的兴趣，这也是我想去欧洲发达国家旅游的一个原因，能够看看那些只是在教科书中看见过的真实的建筑、好好的去领悟一下这些建筑也是我一直的愿望。难道我们这样真挚的感情和愿望还会产生可信度的危机吗？我们十分不能理解。
二、在申根国逗留条件方面，尽管我们现在是自己创业，不属中国的富豪阶层，但我们对于我们的专业非常有信心，在欧美国家建筑设计这个行业可能已经是夕阳产业了范畴了，但在中国建筑设计仍属于非常热门的行业，我们会留在我们热爱的中国为国家的建筑设计行业做出更多更大的贡献。我有一个幸福的家庭，我深爱着我的妻子，我们双方的父母都还健在，虽然我们没有和父母住在一起，但是我们还是经常会面的，我们对孝道非常注重，照顾他们也是我们的义务和责任。我们按照要求向贵国驻华使馆出示了足够的银行存款证明，房产证明，以及车辆拥有证明等。坦诚地讲，我们没有过太多出境旅游的经历（出境只是去过香港和澳门），更没有赴法旅行的经验，鉴于此，我们不得不选择跟团旅游，旅游行程等安排全部都是由国旅提供的，我想团里面的每个游客的应该都是一样的吧。我把一些相关的资料放在了附近里面希望您可以看看。
读到这里，相信您应该能够理解，在付出这么多的努力之后，却为指为“可信度不高”，那是怎样的一种心情，对此我感到悲哀和迷惘。
我们完全理解并相信这样的决定并非针对个人。然而，我们无法对那些并非事实的指控保持缄默。我们认为我们已根据领事处所要求的材料清单提供相应的证明文件，如果您认为其中有任何虚假、疏漏，或需提供其他补充材料，我们认为我们有权要求被告知。我们希望我们的签证申请可以重新考虑，为避免沟通上存在误会或偏差，如能获得一次面谈的机会，我们将不胜感激。

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Answer 1

Dear visa officer Sir:
A: hello! Thank you for your busy schedule to read my letter. My English is not good, but due to time emergency, I have to write this letter. My name is XXX, my wife and I on June 21, signed on July 18th in CITS to European travel plans, we were told that the passport on July 12th (visa application no. : 00000000) is rejected, the reason is as follows: "8, you provide the purpose about travel and stay in the schengen countries conditions information credibility is not high". I received this letter, we feel frustrated, even, to be honest with you, feel emotionally hurt. As a received a good education, have legitimate career of Chinese citizens, we just want to be able to take advantage of this hard-won holiday this year a desire to travel to France and other European countries. I strongly think that your refusal is not reasonable for us, for the following reasons:
A, in terms of tourist destination, we have been passionate about for years Europe's extremely rich cultural heritage and tourist area with beautiful natural scenery and ethnic customs. As early as in 2005, I bought my current home, village is called provence (address: chengdu, sichuan province thesis shu yue road no. 6), at that time I promised his wife must be together with her to provence in France to see real, see the beauty of the lavender flower fields, but very sorry, so far to action, it is in my heart always felt guilty. Also after I graduated from university in 2000, has been engaged in architectural design industry, I has a keen interest in the architecture design, this is also I want to go to the one cause of the European developed countries travel, can have a look at those seen only in the textbooks of real construction, good to digest these buildings is also I always wish. Can't we so sincere affection and desire will produce the credibility crisis? We are very can't understand.
Terms of second, stay in the schengen countries, even though we are now starting my own business, not China's very rich, but we are very confident for our professional, this industry may have in European and American countries building design is a sunset industry category, but is still very hot in China architecture design industry, we will stay in our love for the country's architectural design industry in China to make greater contribution. I have a happy family, I love my wife, we both sides of the parents are still alive, although we did not live with your parents, but we still meet regularly, we pay attention to filial piety very, also is our obligation and responsibility to take care of them. We had been asked to present to your embassy in China enough bank deposit proof, house property proof, and vehicle ownership certificate, etc. To be honest, we don't have too many leaves country the traveling experience (outbound only been to Hong Kong and Macao), nor where the travel experience, in view of this, we have to choose with group travel, travel arrangements are all provided by CITS, I want to group the each visitor should are the same. I put some related information in the near hope you can see inside.
Read here, I believe you should be able to understand, after so much effort, is refers to "the credibility is not high, that is how a kind of mood, I'm sad and confused.
We fully understand and believe that such a decision is not personal. However, we are unable to keep quiet about those charges is not the case. We think we have list the required documents according to consular premises to provide the corresponding documents, if you think there is any false, omissions, or other supplemental materials should be provided, we think we shall have the right to demand was told. We hope we can reconsider visa application, to avoid misunderstanding or errors in the communication, if you can get a chance to interview, we will be appreciated.

Answer 2

Dear visa officer:
Hello. Thank you for your busy schedule to read my letter. My English is not good, but because of the time is urgent, I have to write this letter yourself. My name is XXX, my wife and I signed in July 18th to the European tourism planning in China in June 21st July 12th, we were told that the passport (visa application number: 00000000) is rejected, the reasons are as follows: "8, you provide about travel and stay in the Schengen states on the condition of information credibility is not high". Receipt of this letter, we feel frustrated, and, frankly, that's been hurt. As a well-educated, have a legitimate occupation of the Chinese citizens, we just want to take advantage of this be not easily won the holiday a desire, to travel in France and other European countries. I strongly believe that you on our refusal is unreasonable, for several reasons:
One, in the tourist destination, our natural scenery and ethnic customs love for European countries extremely rich cultural heritage and tourist areas of the beautiful. Back in 2005 I bought my house now, the district's name is called Provence (address: Jinniu District Sichuan Chengdu Shu Yue Road No. 6), then I promised my wife must be together with her to go to France to have a look the real Provence, have a look the beautiful lavender field, but rather a pity, so far only to action, which has always felt guilty in my heart. I graduated from the University in 2000 after it has been engaged in the architectural design industry, I have strong interest in architectural design, this is I want to go to one of the reasons the European developed countries can have a look those travel, just in the textbook saw the real building, good to understand what these buildings is always my desire. Are we so sincere feelings and desires will have a credibility crisis? We cannot understand.
Two, in the Schengen states of conditions of stay, although we now is your own business, do not belong to the class of wealthy Chinese, but we are very confident in the professional, Europe and the United States may be building design of this industry is a sunset industry category, but the design is still very popular in Chinese construction industry, we will in our love for Chinese architectural design industry countries make greater contributions. I have a happy family, I love my wife, our parents are still alive, though we did not live with their parents, but we are still in regular meeting, we pay more attention to the filial piety, to take care of them is our duty and responsibility. In accordance with our requirements to your embassy in China to produce sufficient proof of bank deposits, real estate certificates, and vehicle ownership certificate. Frankly, we don't have too much experience of outbound tourism (exit only been to Hongkong and Macao), but not in France travel experience, in view of this, we have to choose to travel with the regiment, travel arrangements are all provided by travel, I think every visitor there are all the same. I put some relevant information in the hope that you can have a look around.
Read here, I believe you should be able to understand, after paying so much effort, it is referred to as "credibility is not high", that is what kind of mood, I felt sad and lost it.
We fully understand and believe that there is nothing personal. However, we cannot keep silent about those who are not the fact charges. We think we have the bill of materials according to consular premises to provide relevant documents, if you think there is any false, omission, or any other supplementary materials, we believe that we have the right to request told. We hope our visa application can be considered, in order to avoid misunderstanding or bias in communication, such as to get an interview opportunity, we would appreciate it.

Answer 3

His Excellency the Honourable officer: Hello! thank you for taking time out to read my letter. My English is not good, but because of the time of emergency, I had to own letter this letter. My name is XXX, my wife and I on June 21 signed on July 18 in travel Europe travel plans, July 12, we were told passports (visa application number: 00000000) was refused for the following reasons: "8, you provide with regard to their purpose and conditions of stay in Schengen information credibility is not high." When you receive this letter, we are dismayed, even, frankly, felt emotionally hurt. As a Chinese citizen had received a good education, decent employment, we just want to be able to take advantage of a hard won this year's holiday wishes to a compensation, to France and other European countries for tourism. I strongly believe that you're in our refusal is unreasonable, there are several reasons: first, in the area of tourism, we have been interested in European countries is extremely rich in cultural heritage and the beautiful scenery of the natural tourism area, and ethnic customs. Early in 2005 I on purchase has I now of housing, community of name on called Provence (address: Sichuan Chengdu Jinniu District Shu jumped road 6th,), then I on promised had wife must to and she together to France to see real of General Luo Mong Kok Republika, see that beautiful of Kaoru clothing grass spent Tin, but quite regret, has only to put action, this in I heart has been think guilty. I had been engaged in architectural design industry after graduating in 2000, architectural design for a touch of interest to me, which is what I think one reason for traveling to developed countries in Europe, able to look at those who just see in the textbook construction, to perceive the real wishes of the building is what I have been. Are we sincere feelings and aspirations have a credibility crisis? we can't understand. II, and in Schengen stay conditions aspects, despite we now is themselves venture, not is China of Regal class, but we for we of professional very has confidence, in Europe national architectural design this industry may has is sunset industry has areas has, but in China architectural design still belonging to very hot of industry, we will left in we love of China for national of architectural design industry made more more large of contribution. I have a happy family, I love my wife, both of our parents are still alive, although we do not have and lived with her parents, but we meet regularly, we are very focused on filial piety, care for them is our duty and responsibility. We require to the Embassy in your country to produce enough Bank certificate of deposit, certificate of house property, and vehicle ownership certificates. Frankly speaking, we have not had too many experiences of outbound tourism (exit only to Hong Kong and Macau), and didn't go to France travel experience, in view of this, we have to choose the package tour, tours and other arrangements would have to be provided by the travel, I think each visitor of the mission should be the same. I put some relevant information in the neighborhood want you to look at. Reading this, I believe you should be able to understand, work so much harder ...翻译器翻得，你看看

Answer 4

建议你找专业人士翻译。。。。。
Dear visa officer:
Hello. Thank you for your busy schedule to read my letter. My English is not good, but because of the time is urgent, I have to write this letter yourself. My name is XXX, my wife and I signed in July 18th to the European tourism planning in China in June 21st July 12th, we were told that the passport (visa application number: 00000000) is rejected, the reasons are as follows: "8, you provide about travel and stay in the Schengen states on the condition of information credibility is not high". Receipt of this letter, we feel frustrated, and, frankly, that's been hurt. As a well-educated, have a legitimate occupation of the Chinese citizens, we just want to take advantage of this be not easily won the holiday a desire, to travel in France and other European countries. I strongly believe that you on our refusal is unreasonable, for several reasons:
One, in the tourist destination, our natural scenery and ethnic customs love for European countries extremely rich cultural heritage and tourist areas of the beautiful. Back in 2005 I bought my house now, the district's name is called Provence (address: Jinniu District Sichuan Chengdu Shu Yue Road No. 6), then I promised my wife must be together with her to go to France to have a look the real Provence, have a look the beautiful lavender field, but rather a pity, so far only to action, which has always felt guilty in my heart. I graduated from the University in 2000 after it has been engaged in the architectural design industry, I have strong interest in architectural design, this is I want to go to one of the reasons the European developed countries can have a look those travel, just in the textbook saw the real building, good to understand what these buildings is always my desire. Are we so sincere feelings and desires will have a credibility crisis? We cannot understand.
Two, in the Schengen states of conditions of stay, although we now is your own business, do not belong to the class of wealthy Chinese, but we are very confident in the professional, Europe and the United States may be building design of this industry is a sunset industry category, but the design is still very popular in Chinese construction industry, we will in our love for Chinese architectural design industry countries make greater contributions. I have a happy family, I love my wife, our parents are still alive, though we did not live with their parents, but we are still in regular meeting, we pay more attention to the filial piety, to take care of them is our duty and responsibility. In accordance with our requirements to your embassy in China to produce sufficient proof of bank deposits, real estate certificates, and vehicle ownership certificate. Frankly, we don't have too much experience of outbound tourism (exit only been to Hongkong and Macao), but not in France travel experience, in view of this, we have to choose to travel with the regiment, travel arrangements are all provided by travel, I think every visitor there are all the same. I put some relevant information in the hope that you can have a look around.
Read here, I believe you should be able to understand, after paying so much effort, it is referred to as "credibility is not high", that is what kind of mood, I felt sad and lost it.
We fully understand and believe that there is nothing personal. However, we cannot keep silent about those who are not the fact charges. We think we have the bill of materials according to consular premises to provide relevant documents, if you think there is any false, omission, or any other supplementary materials, we believe that we have the right to request told. We hope our visa application can be considered, in order to avoid misunderstanding or bias in communication, such as to get an interview opportunity, we would appreciate it.
这是机器翻译，不怎么好！会出现语法错误。。。。
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Answer 5

尊敬的签证官阁下：
您好！
感谢您于百忙中阅读我的来信。
我的英文不好，但由于时间紧急，我不得不自己来信这封信。我叫XXX，我和我妻子于6月21日在国旅签订了7月18号赴欧洲旅游的计划，7月12号我们被告知护照（签证申请号：00000000）被拒签，理由如下：“8、您提供的关于旅行目的和在申根国逗留条件方面信息可信度不高”。收到此函时，我们感到沮丧不已，甚至，坦白说，觉得感情上受到了伤害。
作为一个受过良好教育、有正当职业的中国公民，我们?

His Excellency respect
of the
visa
officer
:
Hello!
Thank
you
for
your time reading
my
letter.
My
English
is not good,
but
because
of the time
emergency,
I
had to
mail
this
letter.My
name is
XXX,
me
and
my
wife
was
signed
on
june
21 in
travel
plans
to travel
to
Europe
on july
18,
july 12,
we were
told
that passport (
visa
application number
:
00000000 )
is
refused, the
reasons
are as follows :
"
8,
you
provide
information about
travel
purposes and
in
respect
of Shen genguo conditions of stay
confidence level is not
high
".When you receive
this
letter,
we
are
frustrated, and
even,
frankly,
think that feelings were
hurt.
As
a
Chinese citizen received a good
education,
a
decent wage,

们只不过是希望能够趁着今年来之不易的假期一偿心愿，到法国及其他欧洲国家进行旅游。
我强烈的认为你们对我们的拒签是不合理的，有以下几点原因：一、在旅游目的方面，我们多年来就钟情于欧洲各国极其丰富的文化底蕴以及各旅游地区的秀丽的自然风光及民族风情。早在2005年我就购买了我现在的住房，小区的名字就叫普罗旺斯（地址：四川成都金牛区蜀跃路6号），那时我就答应过妻子一定要和她一起到法国去看看真正的普罗旺斯，看看那美?

Just
wanted
to
take advantage of the hard-earned holiday
this year, a
claim
wish
to
travel
in France
and
other
European countries.
I
strongly believe that refusal
was
unreasonable for
you
to
us, for
the following several
reasons
:First,
in
terms
of tourism
purposes,
we're
interested in
European countries for many years an extremely rich
cultural heritage and
the
tourist
area
of
beautiful natural
scenery
and
ethnic
customs.Back
in
2005
I
bought
my
house
right now,
residential name of
Provence (
Address
:
jinniu District, Chengdu, Sichuan
6th,
Shu -
Hop
Road
),
then
I'll
give him that his wife had
to
go
with
her
to
France
to
see a
real
Provence,
look at that
beautiful?