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希望能专业英语帮忙翻译这篇文章！

知道网友你好！我现在急切的需要你的帮助。我和我老婆打算本月18号赴欧洲旅行，可是前天（7月12号）我们却收到了法国领事馆的拒签函，弄的我们相当的郁闷。我们找的国旅，他们说可以写申诉信。因为我的英文10多年度没有碰过了，故请你帮我翻译和润色一下我的申诉信。感谢支持，面对不公正待遇，我们会争取每个申诉的机会的。悬赏分我将提升至我最高极限！

尊敬的签证官阁下：

您好！感谢您于百忙中阅读我的来信。我的英文不好，但由于时间紧急，我不得不自己来信这封信。我叫XXX，我和我妻子于6月21日在国旅签订了7月18号赴欧洲旅游的计划，7月12号我们被告知护照（签证申请号：00000000）被拒签，理由如下：“8、您提供的关于旅行目的和在申根国逗留条件方面信息可信度不高” 。收到此函时，我们感到沮丧不已，甚至，坦白说，觉得感情上受到了伤害。作为一个受过良好教育、有正当职业的中国公民，我们只不过是希望能够趁着今年来之不易的假期一偿心愿，到法国及其他欧洲国家进行旅游。我强烈的认为你们对我们的拒签是不合理的，有以下几点原因：
一、在旅游目的方面，我们多年来就钟情于欧洲各国极其丰富的文化底蕴以及各旅游地区的秀丽的自然风光及民族风情。早在2005年我就购买了我现在的住房，小区的名字就叫普罗旺斯（地址：四川成都金牛区蜀跃路6号），那时我就答应过妻子一定要和她一起到法国去看看真正的普罗旺斯，看看那美丽的薰衣草花田，但相当遗憾，至今才得以付诸行动，这在我心中一直觉得内疚。另外我2000年大学毕业后就一直在从事建筑设计行业，我对建筑设计有着浓厚的兴趣，这也是我想去欧洲发达国家旅游的一个原因，能够看看那些只是在教科书中看见过的真实的建筑、好好的去领悟一下这些建筑也是我一直的愿望。难道我们这样真挚的感情和愿望还会产生可信度的危机吗？我们十分不能理解。
二、在申根国逗留条件方面，尽管我们现在是自己创业，不属中国的富豪阶层，但我们对于我们的专业非常有信心，在欧美国家建筑设计这个行业可能已经是夕阳产业了范畴了，但在中国建筑设计仍属于非常热门的行业，我们会留在我们热爱的中国为国家的建筑设计行业做出更多更大的贡献。我有一个幸福的家庭，我深爱着我的妻子，我们双方的父母都还健在，虽然我们没有和父母住在一起，但是我们还是经常会面的，我们对孝道非常注重，照顾他们也是我们的义务和责任。我们按照要求向贵国驻华使馆出示了足够的银行存款证明，房产证明，以及车辆拥有证明等。坦诚地讲，我们没有过太多出境旅游的经历（出境只是去过香港和澳门），更没有赴法旅行的经验，鉴于此，我们不得不选择跟团旅游，旅游行程等安排全部都是由国旅提供的，我想团里面的每个游客的应该都是一样的吧。我把一些相关的资料放在了附近里面希望您可以看看。
读到这里，相信您应该能够理解，在付出这么多的努力之后，却为指为“可信度不高”，那是怎样的一种心情，对此我感到悲哀和迷惘。
我们完全理解并相信这样的决定并非针对个人。然而，我们无法对那些并非事实的指控保持缄默。我们认为我们已根据领事处所要求的材料清单提供相应的证明文件，如果您认为其中有任何虚假、疏漏，或需提供其他补充材料，我们认为我们有权要求被告知。我们希望我们的签证申请可以重新考虑，为避免沟通上存在误会或偏差，如能获得一次面谈的机会，我们将不胜感激。

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Answer 1

Know friends hello! I need your help urgently. My wife and I intend to travel to Europe this month on the 18th, but the day before yesterday (July 12) we have received a refusal letter the French Consulate, we get quite depressed. We are looking for CITS, they say you can write Shensu Xin. Because my English is not touched up over 10 years, so please help me translate and polish my Shensu Xin. Thanks for the support, the face of injustice, we will take every opportunity to appeal. Reward points I raised to my highest limit! Dear Visa Officer you: Hello! Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. My English is not good, but because of time-critical, I had his letter this letter. My name is XXX, I and my wife on June 21 at CITS signed July 18 to Europe travel plans, July 12 we are told that a passport (visa application number: 00000000) was refused for the following reasons: "8 you provide on travel purpose and conditions of stay in the Schengen Information credibility is not high. " Receipt of this letter, we were frustrated, and even, frankly, I feel emotionally hurt. As a well-educated, have a proper job of Chinese citizens, we just want to be able to take advantage of the hard-earned vacation a year subordinated wish, to France and other European countries for tourism. I strongly believe you to our refusal is unreasonable for the following reasons: First, the purpose of travel, we love the European countries for many years on an extremely rich cultural heritage as well as the tourist areas and beautiful natural scenery ethnic customs. Back in 2005 I bought my current home, community name is called Provence (Address: Chengdu, Sichuan Jinniu Shu Yue Road No. 6), then I promised the wife must go to France with her look the real Provence, look at that beautiful lavender fields, but rather regret so far was able to put into action, which in my heart always felt guilty. In addition, I in 2000 after graduating from university has been engaged in architectural design industry, I have a keen interest in architectural design, which is why I want to go to European countries travel a reason to look at those only seen in textbooks true building, good to comprehend how these buildings is what I always desire. Are we so sincere feelings and desires will produce credibility crisis do? We are not to understand. Second, the conditions of stay in the Schengen area, even though we are now their own business, not of China's wealthy class, but we are very confident of our professional, architectural design in Europe and America may have been in this industry is a sunset industry, the scope, but architectural design in China is still a very popular industry, we will stay in China for the country we love the architectural design industry to make more and greater contributions. I have a happy family, I love my wife, we both parents are still alive, although we do not live with their parents, but we still meet regularly, we are very focused on filial piety, care for them is our obligations and responsibilities. We follow the requirements of your country's embassy to produce sufficient proof of bank deposits, real estate proof, and proof of vehicle ownership. Frankly speaking, we do not have too many outbound tourism experience (outbound only been to Hong Kong and Macao), and no experience of traveling to France, in view of this, we had to choose travel with the group, all travel arrangements are made, etc. CITS to offer, I think every group of tourists inside should be the same bar. I put some relevant information on the neighborhood which I hope you can see. Read here, I believe you should be able to understand, after paying so much effort, but as referring to the "credibility is not high," it is what kind of mood, and I feel sad and confused. We fully understand and believe that such a decision was not personal. However, we can not for the fact that those allegations to remain silent. We thought we had under the consular premises list of materials required to provide the appropriate documents, if you believe there is any false, omissions, or must provide other supplementary materials, we believe that we are entitled to request to be informed. We hope that our visa application can be reconsidered, in order to avoid misunderstandings or bias exists in communication, such as the opportunity to get an interview, we would be grateful. -------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------

Answer 2

Dear Visa Officer ，

Hello! Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. My English is not good, but because of time-critical, I had to write this lettermyself. My name is XXX, my wife and I on June 21 at CITS signed July 18 to Europe travel plans, July 12 we are told that a passport (visa application number: 00000000) was refused for the following reasons: "8 you provide on travel purpose and conditions of stay in the Schengen Information credibility is not high. " Receipt of this letter, we were frustrated, and even, frankly, I feel emotionally hurt. As a well-educated, have a proper job of Chinese citizens, we just want to be able to take advantage of the hard-earned vacation a year subordinated wish, to France and other European countries for tourism. I strongly believe you to our refusal is unreasonable for the following reasons:
First, the purpose of travel, we love the European countries for many years on an extremely rich cultural heritage as well as various tourist areas beautiful natural scenery and ethnic customs. Back in 2005 I bought my current home, community name is called Provence (Address: Chengdu, Sichuan Jinniu Shu Yue Road No. 6), then I promised the wife must go to France with her look the real Provence, look at that beautiful lavender fields, but rather regret so far was able to put into action, which in my heart always felt guilty. In addition, I in 2000 after graduating from university has been engaged in architectural design industry, I have a keen interest in architectural design, which is why I want to go to European countries travel a reason to look at those only seen in textbooks true building, good to comprehend how these buildings is what I always desire. Are we so sincere feelings and desires will produce credibility crisis do? We are not to understand.
Second, the conditions of stay in the Schengen area, even though we are now their own business, not of China's wealthy class, but we are very confident of our professional, architectural design in Europe and America may have been in this industry is a sunset industry, the scope, but architectural design in China is still a very popular industry, we will stay in China for the country we love the architectural design industry to make more and greater contributions. I have a happy family, I love my wife, we both parents are still alive, although we do not live with their parents, but we still meet regularly, we are very focused on filial piety, care for them is our obligations and responsibilities. We follow the requirements of your country's embassy to produce sufficient proof of bank deposits, real estate proof, and proof of vehicle ownership. Frankly speaking, we do not have too many outbound tourism experience (outbound only been to Hong Kong and Macao), and no experience of traveling to France, in view of this, we had to choose travel with the group, all travel arrangements are made, etc. CITS to offer, I think every group of tourists inside should be the same bar. I put some relevant information on the neighborhood which I hope you can see.
Read here, I believe you should be able to understand, after paying so much effort, but as referring to the "credibility is not high," it is what kind of mood, and I feel sad and confused.
We fully understand and believe that such a decision was not personal. However, we can not for the fact that those allegations to remain silent. We thought we had under the consular premises list of materials required to provide the appropriate documents, if you believe there is any false, omissions, or must provide other supplementary materials, we believe that we are entitled to request to be informed. We hope that our visa application can be reconsidered, in order to avoid misunderstandings or bias exists in communication, such as the opportunity to get an interview, we would be grateful.

Answer 3

我觉得你需要更精确的回答，可以试试付费的

Answer 4

Dear visa officer Sir:

A: hello! Thank you for your busy schedule to read my letter. My English is not good, but due to time emergency, I have to write this letter. My name is XXX, my wife and I on June 21, signed on July 18th in CITS to European travel plans, we were told that the passport on July 12th (visa application no. : 00000000) is rejected, the reason is as follows: "8, you provide the purpose about travel and stay in the schengen countries conditions information credibility is not high". I received this letter, we feel frustrated, even, to be honest with you, feel emotionally hurt. As a received a good education, have legitimate career of Chinese citizens, we just want to be able to take advantage of this hard-won holiday this year, a compensation, to France and other European

Answer 5

去找专业的翻译机构吧，在网上要是翻译的不正确，移交到大使馆可能会出一些问题，到时候很麻烦的。翻译机构比较保险，正确度也高。