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Younger school children (aged 5-10) should be required to learn art and music in addition to math, language, and science.
写自己同意或者不同意这个观点，分5段写，开头，然后3段支持观点的论述，最后结尾。
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Answer 1

with the development of our society and technology ,more and more parents hope their children could learn more things than other children ,including art and music in addition to math, language, and science etc. there might be three reasons contribute to this phenomenon.

first of all,these parents hope their children could enter a good high school ,so that they can receive better education ,and have more opportunities be admitted into top college.
second,as we all know, it is become more and more difficult for people to find a good job in our society ,if we prepair ealier ,then we will have more competitiveness ,and without doubt ,we wil have more chances to find a dood job which have a salary .
and finally ,last but not the least , the more knowledge we learn ,the more personnal cultivation
wehave .
but from a personnal point of view ,young children should have more time to play games and relax , let them learn too much things will go agains thier hair (俚语：违反他们的天性) so ,why not
spend more time with them to play more fun games ?
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Answer 2

Nowadays more and more children between five and ten are often required to learn art and music in addition to math, language and science. I think it a good idea. There are some reasons.
First art can broaden children's mind , which can help with their study in many subjects. Second , art and music can provide pleasure for them , which is good to their health. Finally knowing some art can increase the chance to find a good job in the future.
So As far as I am concerned,learning art and music at early age is necessary . It is not only the skill in their future life but it can also help make their life colorful .