Question

英语短文改错，急

This morning,I went up to the People's Park with Mary to fly a kite.We got a very nice kite,and it was so a lovely day.So we were sure to have a lot of funs. Once the kite went up into the sky.I began to run very fast.I hoped that it will go highter and highter.Then suddenly I felt anything wrong.Looking up into the sky.I was disappointing to find that the kite had broken bad.Then Mary comforted me,say,''Now,you know who makes a kite fly high.It's patience and skill.'' Yes,I've learned good lesson today.

Answer 1

今天早晨，我和玛丽到人民公园 放风筝。我们得到了一个很好的风筝，而且天气特别好。于是我们确信能获得许多的乐趣。
当风筝飞入天空的时候。我开始快速跑。我希望风筝越飞越高。然而突然间我感到事情出了问题。仰望天空，我失落的发现风筝坏了。于是玛丽安慰我说：“现在，你知道谁使风筝飞得高了吧。那就是耐心和技巧”。是的，我今天学会了很好的一课。

Answer 2

第二行：and it was so a lovely day ，改so为such
So we were sure to have a lot of funs，改为 so we were sure that we would have a lot of fun
第三行：kite went up into the sky，改为 kite started to fly high in the sky
go highter，改为 fly higher
第四行：Then suddenly I felt anything wrong，改Suddenly, I felt something wrong.Then ,I looked up into the sky and the kite had been broken.
第五行：you know who makes a kite fly high.，改为 you know what makes a kite flies high
第六行：skill，改为 skills
learned good ，改为 learned a good