Question

哪位大神能帮我修改一下这篇作文，急需！！！！！！！！！！！！

the speech i want to give today is how to learn English well.
many pople think that it is difficult to learn English,and they do not know how to study it. while i have some methods here,you may have a try .first of all,you should remember English words,and just talk with your classmates to improve your English.Besides, the grammar learning is also important for our English,it can help us if we learn it well.Of course,you can choose to listen to English popular sings or wahtch English films,both are good choices.
May all of you make a great improvement in English learning.
Thank you.

Answer 1

可是我就在这重要的一天出了不少叉子---叉子应该改为“岔子”
你这丫头嗓门这么这么大呀----是怎么这么大吧
另一个霉事又来给我敲门拜访--是另一件倒霉事
彭丹171半---半改为班才对吧
看来今天是我的倒霉热咯-----热改“人"

Answer 2

while i have some methods here，怎么有个while，表示什么，如果要我说的话so i will give you some metnods,from which yopu can benefit.first of all,you would better remember english words as much as you can and talk with your classmates,only in this way,can you improve your spoken English.等等，忘记问你是读几年级的，倘若是初中的不错了，语法基本没错，如果是高中，就显的有点简单，多数都是简单句，考场上不会得多分的

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我是初二的

Answer 3

I want to talk today is how to learn English well.

Many people think that learning English is difficult, they don't know how to learn it. I have some methods here, you can try. First of all, you should remember English words, tell your classmates to improve your English. In addition, learning English is also very important in grammar, but if we learn it well help us. Of course, you can choose to listen to English pop concert or wahtch English movies, are a good choice, can also with classmates, I hope you will support me!

You may be in a great improvement in English learning.

Thank you.