Question

英语短文写作 急

假设你叫李华，今年六月份将从北京新华中学高三毕业，打算到美国哥伦比亚大学上学。 现在请你根据厦门的个人信息，用英语写一封信。申请留学
李华 女 1993.6
北京
新华高中 各门功课优秀
申请院校
哥伦比亚大学 申请专业；计算机科学
爱好；网络和英语 电子邮箱lihua93@sina.com

Answer 1

Dear Sir orMadam:

Hello!My name is Li Hua .I'm a girl.one born in June1993 .I live in beijing. i study at xinghuamiddle school. This june i will finish senior middle school soon and go to college.all the subjects I have verygood. Myhobby is English and the network, it is for this reason I apply for your school’scomputer science.

My e-meil address is lihua93@sina.com . I am reallyhonored to be your school if a student, I would be very proud, and look forwardto your good news.

the best wishes
Dear Li hua
当然 你不可以这么随便 信要写的正式一点 开头 前面 如果题目交代了地址 一定要写上去 地址写的顺序是从小到大来写的

Answer 2

Dear Sir orMadam:

I am full of feelings of excitement toapply computer science at Columbia University.Now I will produce myself tu you.

My name is Li Hua, one born in June1993 for girls. BeijingXinhua Middle School is my almamater.In school, all the subjects I have verygood. Myhobby is English and the network, it is for this reason I apply for your school’scomputer science.

My mail is lihua93＠sina.com, I am reallyhonored to be your school if a student, I would be very proud, and look forwardto your good news.