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weallknowthatwhatmedicinehelpstomakewebetterwhenweareill.Butitisverydangeroustakemedi...
we all know that what medicine helps to make we better when we are ill. But it is very dangerous take medicine without the doctor's advice. Medicine can sometimes make us ill or even kills us. We must be careful before we took medicine. We should take an overdose because too much medicine is harmful to our health. which is known to all, children are likely to take sugar-coated pills for sweets. This may cost them thier life. So we must take great care and pull all medicine out children's reach
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We all know that (去掉what) medicine (去掉helps to) makes us(we改成us) better when we are ill. But it is very dangerous to (添加了to) take medicine without the doctor's advice. Medicine can sometimes make us ill or even kill (kills 变成kill) us. We must be careful when (before 改成when) we take (took 变成take)medicine. We should not(加了not) take an overdose because too much medicine is harmful to our health. It (Which 变成It) is known to all that (加 that) children are likely to take sugar-coated pills for sweets. This may cost them their lives (原文是thier life). So we must take great care and put (pull 改成put) all medicine out of (加了of) children's reach.
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we all know that what medicine helps to make we (us ) better when we are ill. But it is very dangerous(to) take medicine without the doctor's(doctors') advice. Medicine can sometimes make us ill or even kills (kill )us. We must be careful before we took(take)medicine. We should(shouldn't ) take an overdose because too much medicine is harmful to our health. which is known to all, children are likely to take sugar-coated pills for sweets. This may cost (shortened这里用cost不行,其只有花费的意思)them thier (their)life(lives). So we must take great care(of ) and pull(put) all medicine out(of) children's reach
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We all know that what(去掉) medicine helps to make we(改为 us) better when we are ill. But it is very dangerous (加入 to)take medicine without the doctor's advice. Medicine can sometimes make us ill or even kills(改为kill) us. We must be careful before we took(改为take) medicine. We should(改为 should'nt) take an overdose because too much medicine is harmful to our health. which(改为As) is known to all, children are likely to take sugar-coated pills for sweets. This may cost them their life(改为lives). So we must take great care and pull(改为put) all medicine out (加入of)children's reach
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