Question

这有一段话请大家帮正修正语法！！多谢！！！拜托了！

As our lives to enter the network information age, which gives us a lot of convenience ,However, the ensuing more invisible dangers.It gradually became a global problem, and tens of millions of Internet users , but these ignorant , still believe that the network is a very safe place ,They can offer exchange , sharing, shopping , and more.This causes a problem for users of online privacy important to you ?Today, the world is only the United States and some European countries have set up corresponding measures for the protection of privacy .Obviously, like a chameleon Followers haunt around us,And we in this Internet age , but the lack of a layer of the shell can protect our privacy .

Answer 1

1. As our lives to enter the network information age,去掉to 或者前面加bigin。As引导时间状从，后面加从句 你的从句中没有谓语。

2. 第一句话是不完整的，AS从句后没有主句，但However写的很好，所以建议你把which限从去掉，变成it gives us more and more convenience 或者你自己有更好的。同时 the ensuing more invisible dangers一句在the ensuing 后加are，句子缺主语。

3. but these ignorant 一句去掉but  these ignorant 作同位语。but是连词 连接两个句子，而且放在这翻译不通。或者你可以换成however,these ignorant ...会更合适。

4. This causes a problem for users of online privacy important to you ?这句话我读不懂 你可以告诉我你的意思。

5. the world is only the United States and some European countries ...这个句子是错句，一个句子中不能出现两个谓语，可以改为Today inthis world,only the United...

6.  Obviously， like a chameleon Followers haunt around us,And we in this Internet age , but the lack of a layer of the shell can protect our privacy .这句也是翻译不通，And首先要开头字母小写，and连接两个相同成分，这句中like是介词短语作状语，and后是句子，所以是错句。 but the lack of a layer of the shell can protect our privacy ，这句在整句中不知道社么意思，但a lack of 是短缺的意思

p.s.:如果这篇文章是楼主的作文的话，给楼主写作一些建议和注意

1. 句子中容易缺谓语，要时刻注意提醒自己这一点

2. 注意and but 的运用，不能随便用

3. 如果楼主是高中生 建议写作中不要用这么多大词，很多可能老师都不会认识。用一些课本中的重点词汇就行。

Answer 2

however, that ensues more invisible dangers.
It gradually become a global problem
in the world only the United States and some European countries have set up corresponding measures for the protection of privacy
like a chameleon followers haunt around us,and we are in this internet age , but the lack of a layer of the shell can protect our privacy .

Answer 3

In the network information age,our lives are more convenient.However,there is the more invisible dangers.What's worse,it gradually becomes a global problem.But tens of millions of the internet users who are ignorant still believe that the network is a very safe place.The internet can offer the exchange of products,online shopping,health insurance,and so on.To much more importance,this causes a big problem for the users of online privacy.Today,the world is only the United States and some European countries that have set up corresponding measures for the protection of privacy.Obviously,like a Chameleon Followers Haunt around us,and we are in the internet information age,but the lack of a layer of the shell can protect our privacy.

Answer 4

As our lives entering the network information age,it gives us a lot of convenience.However,with the more invisible danger ensuing,it gradually becomes a grobal problem,and tens of millions of Internet users ,which is ignorant ,still believe that the network is a very safe place .Internet can ofer the services of exchange,sharing ,shopping and so on.but these, at the same time,causes privacy problem for online users.Today ,in the world ,only the United States and some European countries have set up corresponding measures for the protection of privacy .Obviously,this problem acts like a chamelon followers haunting around us.As we live in the Internet age ,the lack of a layer of the shell can't protect our privacy.

Answer 5

我们的生活进入网络信息时代，它给我们带来了许多便利，但是，随之而来的更无形的危险。它逐渐成为一个全球性的问题，和数以百万计的互联网用户，但这些无知的人，仍然相信，网络是一个非常安全的地方，他们可以提供交流，共享，购物，和更多。这引起了网络隐私的重要你的用户一个问题？今天，世界上只有美国和一些欧洲国家都建立了相应的对隐私权的保护措施。显然，像变色龙一样的追随者围绕在我们身边，我们在这个互联网时代，但一层壳的缺乏可以保护我们的隐私。

Answer 6

As our lives enter the network information age, it gives us a lot of convenience .However, it ensues more invisible dangers.It gradually became a global problem, and tens of millions of Internet users , still believe that the network is a very safe place ,for it can offer exchange , sharing, shopping , and more.This causes a problem for users of online privacy important to you ?Today, in the world only the United States and some European countries have set up corresponding measures for the protection of privacy .Obviously, the world like a chameleon Followers haunt around us.So we in this Internet age, the lack of a layer of the shell can protect our privacy .