写作思路及要点：以让我感动的瞬间为题，围绕这一主题展开描写，接着表达自己的想法以及观点。
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Yesterday afternoon I went to the Yuexiu Park. It happened that I saw a touching event. At that time, some people were boating on the lake.
昨天下午我去越秀公园玩，碰巧看到一件感人的事情。当时，有一些人在湖上划船。
Among them was perhaps a happy family. They were taking photos when suddenly the girl fell off the boat into the water. She was struggling and her parents cried out, "Help!Help !" It was obvious that they could not swim at all.
在他们中有一家人正玩得开心。他们正在拍照，忽然小女孩从船上落入水中。她在在水中拼命挣扎，她的父母大声呼救;显然他们不会游泳。
From nearby a young man immediatelyrushed to the lake. Without taking off his clothes, he jumped into the water and quickly swam towards the girl lwho was already tired out. At last he carried her to the lake side. She was saved!
附近一个年轻人立即向湖边冲去。他没有来得及脱衣服就迅速跳入湖中向那个筋疲力尽的女孩游去，最后他将小女孩拖向湖边，她终于得救了。
How happy the parents were! Before they thought of thanking the Young man, he had disappeared!
小女孩的父母喜极而泣，当他们想起感谢那位年轻人时，他已消失在人海。
I'm a student of Junior two and my study is not good at all.
One day I didn't want to go to school so I went to play. I play from two o'clock to six. I forget to go home. When I was playing suddenly I find my mother. She is very happy when she saw me. I don't know what happened but my mother cried. When I find my mother's tears It touched me . I decided to study hard from now on and I will remember to go to school everyday. I love my mother. She is a good mother.
