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Mrs.Harrywenttobedearlyandcouldnotfallsleep.Herhusbandhadgonetothewestonbusinessandwo... Mrs. Harry went to bed early and could not fall sleep.Her husband had gone to the west on business and would be back until next Friday. Mrs. Harry felt a little afraid for alone at home.So she had got a gun with her under her pillow.She turning over and over on bed then she heard the door of her bedroom being opened.She brought out the gun and fire at once.She heard a cry,turned on the light.She found her husband laying on the ground bleeding.He came back earlier than expected. 展开
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Mrs Harry went to bed carly and could not 1
fall sleep.Her husband had gone to the West 2
on business and would be back until next 3
Friday.Mrs Harry felt a little afraid for lonely 4
at home.So she had got a gun with her under 5
her pillow.She was turning over and over on 6
bed then she heard the door of the bedroom 7
being opened .She brought out the gun and fire at once.She heard a cry,turned on the light.She 8
found her husband laying on the ground,bleeding. 9
He came back earlier than expected. 10
1.and改为but 2.sleep 改为asleep3.would后加not4.for改为of5.with改为to6.her去掉7.bed前加the8.fire改fired9.laying改为lying10.正确
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Mrs. Harry went to bed early and could not fall sleep sleep 改为asleep
Her husband had gone to the west on business had gone to 改为 had been to
Mrs. Harry felt a little afraid for alone at home alone 改为loneiy
She turning over and over on bed then she heard the door of her bedroom heard 改为 hearing
She brought out the gun and fire at once brought 改为 takes
She heard a cry,turned on the light cry 改为crying
She found her husband laying on the ground bleeding. laying 改为lying
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Mrs. Harry went to bed early but could not fall sleep.Her husband had gone to the west on business and wouldn't be back until next Friday. Mrs. Harry felt a little afraid of loneliness at home.So she had got a gun with her under her pillow.She turned over and over on bed then she heard the door of hers bedroom being open.She took out the gun and fired at once.She heard a cry,turning on the light.She found her husband laying on the ground and bleeding.He came back earlier than expected.
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