帮忙看一下这个英文诗是否有语病
Servaldayshavepassed,wehavegotonwellwithyou.Whenweknewyouwillleaveus,wefeelsosad.Ourh...
Serval days have passed ,
we have got on well with you.
When we knew you will leave us ,
we feel so sad.
Our happy memory will have forever in each other's heart!
In the sea saves the friend, the horizon, if neighbor . 展开
we have got on well with you.
When we knew you will leave us ,
we feel so sad.
Our happy memory will have forever in each other's heart!
In the sea saves the friend, the horizon, if neighbor . 展开
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每行首字母都要大写
When we knew you will leave us ,
时态前后不一致 will 改would
Our happy memory will have forever in each other's heart!
改为will forever be in
In the sea saves the friend, the horizon, if neighbor .
改为in the sea that saves，friends用复数，
最后一句不太明白意思 不会改
When we knew you will leave us ,
时态前后不一致 will 改would
Our happy memory will have forever in each other's heart!
改为will forever be in
In the sea saves the friend, the horizon, if neighbor .
改为in the sea that saves，friends用复数，
最后一句不太明白意思 不会改
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