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请英文大神们帮忙改改错,大神们帮帮忙,万分感谢!

Dear Doctor James,How is everything?It's nearly new semester,we are all expecting to star the new life in Morehead.Recently,we do some preparation in luggage and finance,and everything is going on smoothly.But we have some little question about the tuition.How can we pay for it?By credit card,cash,bank draft or some other ways?And what is the accuracy number of tuition?is the "personal funds"part which is written in the DS-2019 form?And the insurance fee is included in the tuition fee or not?looking for your reply,best wishes!中文意思是:快到新学期了,我们都期待着在摩尔海德的新生活,最近我们在做一些关于行李和资金上的准备,所有的事情都进行得很顺利,但有几个关于学费的小问题想请教您.我们可以用什么方式交学费?用信用卡,现金,银行汇票还是其他什么方式?另外准确的学费金额是什么呢?是在DS-2019表格“个人承担”中写的那部分金额吗？以及保险的费用是否被包含在学费内？期待你的回信？

Answer 1

Dear Doctor James,How is everything?It's nearly new semester,we are all expecting to star the new life in Morehead.Recently,we do some preparation in luggage and finance,and everything is going on smoothly.But we have some little question about the tuition.How can we pay for it?By credit card,cash,bank draft or some other ways?But what we should pay the tuition?Isthe"personal funds"part which is written in the DS-2019 form?The insurance fee is included in tuition fee or not?looking for your reply,best wishes!
一个是有些句首没大写.
还有And可以去掉。
这句：And what is the accuracy number of tuition?i.或许改成：But what we should pay the tuition?

嘻嘻。以上是我修改过的。
希望能帮到你。
你的英语一定学的很好吧！
希望你能采纳！

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谢谢您啦！

Answer 2

dear doctor James, How is everything? it's nearly a new semester, and we are all expecting to start a new life in Morehead. Recently, we have done some preperation in terms of luggage and finance, and everything is going on smoothly. But we have some little questions about the tuition. How can we pay for it? by credit card, cash, bank draft, or some other ways? and what is the accurate number of tuition? Is the "personal fund" which is written in the DS-2019 form? And is the unsurance fee uncluded in the tuition fee or not?
Looking forward to your reply
best wishes.

您的问题是在适当地方要加the， 记住不要写fragments. 在best wishes 后边加上你的姓名

Answer 3

Dear Doctor James,How is everything?New semester is at the corner,we are all looking forward to the new life in Morehead.Recently,we prepared for luggage and finance,and everything is going on smoothly.But we have few questions about the tuition.How can we pay for it?By credit card,cash,bank draft or any other way?And how much should we pay for the tuition exactly?is the "personal funds"part which is written in the DS-2019 form?And I wonder whether the insurance fee is included in the tuition fee or not?looking for your reply,best wishes!

Answer 4

Dear Doctor James,How is everything?New semester is at the corner,we are all looking forward to the new life in Morehead.Recently,we prepared for luggage and finance,and everything is going on