Question

这是一篇短文改错题，一共有十处错误，请帮我找出来，谢谢

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He didn't want share things with other people.For example,when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where Icouldn't find.then he eats itall by himself.He never helped other.He said he is busy.That is,a game of tennis making him very busy.He didn't care if something he did made people angrily.For instance,on one night he played strong and loudly music still 4 o'clock in the morning.But he is difference now.He often helps Grandma with housework ,Mom with cooking and his classmates with their lessons.

Answer 1

1.share--to share (want to do sth.固定搭配）
2.them--it （指代a chocolate cake, 用单数it)
3.在find后加上it下班（find后缺少宾语，故加it，指代a chocolate cake)
4.eats--ate （过去行为用过去式）
5.other--others （others “别人”，可以单独使用；other “别的，其他的”，不能单独使用）
6.busy前的is--was （他过去很忙，故用过去式）
7.angrily--angry ( 做宾补，用形容词：make sb.+adj.)
8.去掉on以轻心 （one night前不加介词）
9.loudly--loud (做定语，修饰music, 用形容词）
10.在4 o'clock前加上at （在时刻前用at）
11.difference--different (作表语，用形容词）

Answer 2

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He didn't want (加上to)share things with other people.For example,when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them(them-it) in a secret place where Icouldn't find.then he eats (eats-ate)itall by himself.He never helped other(other-others).He said he is(is-was) busy.That is,a game of tennis making him very busy.He didn't care if something (something-anything)he did made people angrily(angrily-angry).For instance,on (on去掉)one night he played strong and loudly(loudly-loud) music still 4 o'clock in the morning.But he is difference(difference-different) now.He often helps Grandma with housework ,Mom with cooking and his classmates with their lessons.