Question

100分商务英语翻译 急！ 在线等．今晚立即给分．

此段话如下：”服务业跨国投资的增长原因与服务业国际转移对中国的影响分析．当代世界发展中，直接投资越来越成为经济国际化与全球化的主要驱动力．”要求翻译一定要准确！是写论文英文摘要用的！合适的话今晚立即给分．
xiaojie188 第一句话好象不通哎～．放在WORD里被划绿线了．

Answer 1

首先和楼主说明一下,中文第一句话的中心词为"分析",而分析的内容有并列的两条:增长的原因、对中国的影响。既然是分析，当然会找原因，所以原因二字在英文可不出现。经济国际化其实是全球化的一部分，英文中也不必译出。
The analysis of increasing international investment in service sector and the impact of the international service industry migration on China. Within current global context, FDI (Foreign Direct Investment) is increasingly becoming the major driving force behind globalization.

Answer 2

Services reasons for the growth of cross-border investment and international transfer services to China's impact analysis. The contemporary world development, direct investment has increasingly become economic internationalization and globalization of the main driving force.

Answer 3

Service industry transnational investment growth reason and service industry international shift to China impact analysis. In the contemporary world development, the direct investment becomes the economical internationalization and the globalized main driving influence more and more

Answer 4

这样好点，去yahoo把英文翻译出来还算顺嘴

the cause of transnational investment's increase in service industry and the analysis to the influence of international transfer in service industry upon China.
服务业跨国投资的增长原因与服务业国际转移对中国的影响分析．
in the development of contemporary world, The direct investment has become gradually the main thrust of the economical internationalization and the economical globalization.
当代世界发展中，直接投资越来越成为经济国际化与全球化的主要驱动力．

用词到网上去验证了一下，应该差不多。

论文摘要都是这样的直译的，基本上是一一对应关系，只要语句通顺，人家都能理解。如果要翻译的更好需要更专业的水平了，呵呵

Answer 5

Analysing the causes of increasing transnational investment in service industry and the effects of international transference of service industry on China. With the development of the modern world, direct inverstment has become the major driving force behind the internationalization and globalization of economy.