Question

关于which的用法

我写了一句话：Specifically, in terms of Chinese which is the mostdifficult language in the world, there are plenty of informal usage patterns and slang in Chinese,which we cannot make sure if they are courtesy expressions.
请问这句话能这么写吗？有语法错误吗？两个which的用法正确吗？这么多逗号应该不影响写作的质量吧？多谢回复！

Answer 1

供参考

这句子很俊
只可惜两which字用得够不好

句子反映出在defining及non-defining这两个概念上仍然掌握不够清楚

简单的说
defining(重新下定义)就不要有‘﹐’
non-defining(不下新的定义﹐按字面理解便可)就要有‘﹐’

Chinese 中文不用重新下定义
所以不要有‘﹐’

patterns 及 slang 在这里不是指所有的
而是其中的一些
所以就需要重新界定意思
因此不要有‘﹐’

还有的是
in Chinese可以删去
因为已有 in terms of Chinese

Answer 2

我写了一句话：Specifically, in terms of Chinese which is the mostdifficult language in the world, there are plenty of informal usage patterns and slang in Chinese,which we cannot make sure if they are courtesy expressions.
请问这句话能这么写吗？有语法错误吗？两个which的用法正确吗？这么多逗号应该不影响写作的质量吧？多谢回复！
Generally-speaking, Chinese is the most difficult language in the world ,which has plenty of informal usage patterns and slangs ,which goes beyond our understanding about how to determine if they are formally employed

Served as the most difficult language, Chinese has plenty of informal usage patterns and slangs, which can not be easily determined if they are duly /formally employed in the process of social communication.