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Goodmorningeverybody!It'smyhonortospeakhere,andIamverygladtosharemytopicwithyou.Thent...
Good morning everybody! It's my honor to speak here, and I am very glad to share my topic with you. Then today I'd like to talk something about the plannings of my future life in high school.
You may ask, how to plan for our future life in high school? As we know, being in high school is going to be the most important thing in our life.
First of all, I think we should be relaxed with high school, instead of being hidebound. Later on, we are supposed to change our words into action. Because high school teachers won't concentrate on your study so much. Therefore, we are pushed to consciously learn. meanwhile, we should try our best to finish our homework on time. Finally, not only should we treat our study seriously, but also we could properly relax our selves in our spare time.
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You may ask, how to plan for our future life in high school? As we know, being in high school is going to be the most important thing in our life.
First of all, I think we should be relaxed with high school, instead of being hidebound. Later on, we are supposed to change our words into action. Because high school teachers won't concentrate on your study so much. Therefore, we are pushed to consciously learn. meanwhile, we should try our best to finish our homework on time. Finally, not only should we treat our study seriously, but also we could properly relax our selves in our spare time.
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Good morning everybody! It's my great honor to speak here, and I am very glad to share my topic with you. Then today I'd like to talk something about the plan of my future life in high school.
You may wonder how to plan our life during the three years in high school? As we all know, these time can be regarded as the most important period in our life.
First of all, I think we should learn to relax when we deal with the pressure from the competition and further studies, for a good mentality will help us balance the study and entertainment and stimulate our potential.Secondly,it is important to be flexible in study,instead of being hidebound.You'll find you may save more time than others and won't be afraid the questions are not the same as those you have practised for many times. Then, we are supposed to turn our words into action,because teachers in high school won't urge you to study any more just like before. Therefore, we are pushed to consciously learn,and we must raise any questions when we are confused,otherwise,no one will help you with them. Meanwhile, we should try our best to finish our homework on time. Finally, not only should we treat our study seriously, but also we could properly relax our selves in our spare time.
OK, thank you for listening, that's all.
因为第三段开头你用到了relax 但是看到hirebound 我觉得你是想表达灵活学习 所以和flexible做了搭配 第一句就更改了一下 和最后一句的意思似乎就有些重复了 你可以再调整一下 没有做太大的改动 有些不适当的词汇和表达做了简单的修改 可能也有一些问题 可以提出来一起探讨一下 整体来说写的不错~好好加油
You may wonder how to plan our life during the three years in high school? As we all know, these time can be regarded as the most important period in our life.
First of all, I think we should learn to relax when we deal with the pressure from the competition and further studies, for a good mentality will help us balance the study and entertainment and stimulate our potential.Secondly,it is important to be flexible in study,instead of being hidebound.You'll find you may save more time than others and won't be afraid the questions are not the same as those you have practised for many times. Then, we are supposed to turn our words into action,because teachers in high school won't urge you to study any more just like before. Therefore, we are pushed to consciously learn,and we must raise any questions when we are confused,otherwise,no one will help you with them. Meanwhile, we should try our best to finish our homework on time. Finally, not only should we treat our study seriously, but also we could properly relax our selves in our spare time.
OK, thank you for listening, that's all.
因为第三段开头你用到了relax 但是看到hirebound 我觉得你是想表达灵活学习 所以和flexible做了搭配 第一句就更改了一下 和最后一句的意思似乎就有些重复了 你可以再调整一下 没有做太大的改动 有些不适当的词汇和表达做了简单的修改 可能也有一些问题 可以提出来一起探讨一下 整体来说写的不错~好好加油
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