Question

哪个英语好的来帮帮忙，写一篇英语作文谢谢了，大神帮忙啊

这是一篇命题作文，题目是"David's Day”，写一篇David一天活动情况的小短文。 给了三幅图片，一幅是他在弹钢琴，一幅是他在游泳，还有一幅是他在踢足球。 提示单词和短语：stay at home;swimming pool;favourite sport;playground 要求：1、请用第三人称描写，可做适当想象和发挥。 2、条理清晰，意思明确、连贯，句子通顺，用词得当，语法正确。 3、不少于70个单词。 大概是初一水平，复杂的词也可以用，今天晚上之前回答，如果非常符合我的要求再加10分！

Answer 1

It was sunday, the weather outside was very well.David got up very early,then brushed his teeth and washed face,last he began to have breakfast.After a while,he felt so boring,so he started to play the piano.He played about half an hour.Then he didn't like to stay at home.He opened the door and walked out,there's a swimming pool in front his house.There was a thought came to his mind,that was to swim in the swimming pool.So he swam until his friends came to his house.They asked him to play football in the playground.Football is his favourite sport,of course,he agreed.Then he played football with his friends in the playground for a long time.He had a good time!

Answer 2

It was Sunday,David got up very earily as usual and did morning exercises in the park near his home.When he was having his breakfast,someone knocked at the door.His classmate,Jack came to visit him.By the way,Jack wanted to asked him some questions about the homework,so they did their homework together.After finishing it,David played the piano while Jack played computer games.David asked Jack to have lunch with him.It was very hot,so they went to swim in the swimming pool.Some of Jack's friends found him at 4:00 p.m., then they played football together till 6:00p.m..Though David felt tired,he was very happy indeed