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Howtimeflies!ItisthreeyearssinceMr.Whitecomestoourschool.HewillleaveforLondoninnextwe... How time flies! It is three years since Mr.White comes to our school.He will leave for London in next week.In the past three years,Mr.White has worked harder.He was not only strict to us in our English learning but also always ready to help us with patiences.He made his classes very lively and interesting that all of us enjoyed every minute of it.Our English has improved greatly because of her creative and careful work.Now ,we'd like express our thanks to him.Let's wish him a pleasant journey and wish him good healthy. 应该和一般的改错一样,都是有十个错的 展开
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How time flies! It is three years since Mr.White comes 【comes改为came】to our school.
He will leave for London in【去掉 in】 next week.In the past three years,Mr.White has【去掉has】 worked harder【harder改为hard】.He was not only strict to us in【in 改为 with,strict with 对...严格要求,固定搭配】 our English learning but also always ready to help us with patiences【改为patience,耐心,不可数名词】.He made his classes very【改为 so,与后面 that 搭配,so...that 格式】 lively and interesting that all of us enjoyed every minute of it【改为them,与classes复数对应】.Our English has improved greatly because of her 【her改为his,Mr. Write是男的】creative and careful work.Now ,we'd like 【加to,would like to,固定搭配】express our thanks to him.Let's wish him a pleasant journey and wish him good healthy【healthy 改为 health,用名词】.
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How time flies! It is three years since Mr.White comes(comes--came) to our school.He will leave for London in (in去掉)next week.In the past three years,Mr.White has worked harder(harder--hard).He was not only strict to(to--with) us in our English learning but also always ready to help us with patiences(patiences--patience).He made his classes very(very--so) lively and interesting that all of us enjoyed every minute of it(it-them).Our English has improved greatly because of her (her-his)creative and careful work.Now ,we'd like (加上to)express our thanks to him.Let's wish him a pleasant journey and wish him good healthy(healthy-health)
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