Question

在线等，急啊！！！

Answer 1

第一行as is known,去掉is
第一行are改为is
第二行 addict to it改为addict to them
第三行thinking ability改为thinking abilities
第三行therefore改为however
第五行themselves改为ourselves
第五行better to finish 去掉to
第六行play改为playing
第七行study hardly改为study hard
最后一行the future前加in

Answer 2

As is known, playing computer games are (is) very popular among us (去掉us) students, especially boys. Some even get addict (addicted) to it. It is true that some computer games are good for our thinking ability and they can sometimes help us to relax. Therefore (But), some students spend too many (much) time on them. In my opinions(opinion), we should learn to control themselves(ourselves). We'd better to (to去掉)finish our homework first every day, and then spend a little time play (playing) computer games. As students , we should take it seriously and study hardly (hard). We should try our best to get good grades and become a useful person (加in) the future.

不止10处错误
满意的话 别吝啬采纳～

Answer 3

1. 把第一行的are改成is
2. 把第二行的addict改成addicted
3. 把第三行的to去掉
4. 把第四行的many改成much
5. 把第四行的opinions改成opinion
6. 把第五行的themselves改成ourselves
7. 把第五行的to去掉
8. 把第六行的play改成playing
9. 把第七行的hardly改成hard
10. 在第八行的the前面加in,组成短语in the future (在将来)