Question

急求~！帮我翻译一篇英文自我介绍（后半部分，非软件的）

求大神帮我组织一下！！！
在我读大四的时候，因为不考研，我便回来寻找工作。当时是在一家民营医院，先是在办公室，后来申请转做市场专员（销售类），从去年9月一直到今年6月，由于要回校毕业，就辞职了。当时通过自己的努力，业绩还是相当可观的。这份工作对我的沟通能力和心态都有很大的帮助，我是非常感谢当时的领导还有同事和客户们的。

最后，感谢您能听我介绍我自己。
不要软件翻译的，不要软件翻译的，不要软件翻译的！！那个错误太多！求大神~~~

Answer 1

When I was fourth year in my university studies, I came back in search of a job since I didn't apply for any postgraduate courses. At that time I worked in a private hospital, first doing office work, before I applied for the position of Marketing Specialist (Sales). I've been working there since September last year but I quit my job sometime around June this year because I'm going to graduate. Through my own efforts, I've amassed a rather impressive performance record. This job has helped me a lot especially in the areas of communication skills and attitudes. I'm really grateful towards my superiors, colleagues and my customers.

Lastly, I'm really thankful for your kind attention. Thank you.

Answer 2

In my senior year in college, I decided to seek a job instead of preparing for further study. At first, I worked as a clerk in a private hospital. Later, from last September to June, I applied to be a marketing specialist (in sales). With my efforts, I got appreciable performance. But I resigned for graduation in June. I’m particularly grateful to the leader and my colleagues as well as my clients for their help, and my ability and mentality improved while I worked there.
Thank you for listening to my self-introduction.