Question

英语作文，找一下错误说明一下

Answer 1

第6行hunt 后加 for。hunt 后面接猎物，如hunt deer/ birds/ rabitts 等。hunt for food 觅食。

追答

第7行：they 后面不能用gives, they是第三人称，但不是单数，动词不需要加s。deer （鹿）是单复数同形单词，复数不用加s。

第8行：考虑和上句话对应，不需要用现在完成时，建议改为：... but they are also hunted by people.

倒数第二行：not only... but also ，当not only 放在句首时，句子要倒装，所以改为：Not only are tigers endangered, but also many animals need protection.

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