Question

英语高手急救，求翻译！！！！！！！！！！

急求:
本人需要一份英语的个人介绍，求各位英语高手帮助翻译一下，谢绝用翻译软件！！！字数300以上（可适当增加内容）要符合语法，内容如下：
尊敬的老师：
我的名字是**，20岁。我的学习成绩并不出色，但是我是个热爱学习的人，当然这其中并不只有学科知识，还包括很多生活里的知识。我很开朗和积极，我热爱篮球和街舞，他们使我能够更加自信，即使学习不好，但我对未来仍然充满希望。
我选择学习的专业方向是财务与金融，我希望能够通过在****学习来提高自己的能力。更希望将来能够找到一份稳定的工作，成为一名金融分析师。如果我能够顺利进入****，我想通过三年国内的努力学习，通过大学四六级的英语考试，完成所有的学业目标，让自己的英语水平和各项能力得到提升，最终能够去英国学习，拿到大学文凭，然后回到国内或者留在英国，找一份好的工作，报答我的父母，让他们过上更好的生活。
我认为****是所优秀的学校，是两国最优秀的学校合办的学校，它能够提供最好的教育，我在这里可以受到最好的教育，能够学习到有用的知识。我的英语并不好，但是我相信我能够通过学习，最终使我的英语如同我的母语一样优秀。如果我能进入****，我将端正学习态度，努力的学习英语，完成学习任务，做一个能够让老师和家长满意的学生，为自己的将来而奋斗。
各位大哥大姐 不要把我的这些复制到一个在线翻译网站上就完事啊 我也会啊 我希望的是能够人工翻译 谢谢 麻烦了

Answer 1

My name is **, 20-year-old. My academic performance is not good, but I am a love of learning, of course, which is not only the study of science and knowledge, including knowledge of many lives. I am very cheerful and positive, I love basketball and romance, they enabled me to more self-confident, even learning bad, but I still hope for the future.
I choose to study the professional direction of the Finance and finance, I hope I can learn through the **** to improve their ability. More hope that in future, be able to find a stable job and became a financial analyst. If I can smoothly enter the ****, I would like to three years through the efforts of domestic study, 46 by the University of the English test, complete all the academic goals, so that their standard of English and the ability to upgrade, to finally be able to British study, get a university degree and then return to the country or stay in the United Kingdom, to find a good job, repay my parents, let them lead a better life.
**** I think is the outstanding schools, the two most outstanding schools organised by the schools, it can provide the best education, I am here can be the best education, can learn useful knowledge. My English was not good, but I believe that I can study and eventually make my English as good as my mother tongue. If I could enter ****, I will correct their attitude towards learning and strive to learn English, study and complete the task, one can do for teachers and parents satisfied with the students, for their own future and struggle.

Answer 2

My name is **, 20-year-old. My academic performance is not good, but I am a love of learning, of course, which is not only academic knowledge, but also a lot of life knowledge. I am very cheerful and positive, I love basketball and romance, they enabled me to more self-confident, even learning bad, but I still hope for the future.
I choose to study the professional direction of the Finance and finance, I hope I can learn through the **** to improve their ability. More hope that in future, be able to find a stable job and became a financial analyst. If I can smoothly enter the ****, I would like to three years through the efforts of domestic study, 46 by the University of the English test, complete all the academic goals, so that their standard of English and the ability to upgrade, to finally be able to British study, get a university degree and then return to the country or stay in the United Kingdom, to find a good job, repay my parents, let them lead a better life.
**** I think is the outstanding schools, the two most outstanding schools organised by the schools, it can provide the best education, I am here can be the best education, can learn useful knowledge. My English was not good, but I believe that I can study and eventually make my English as good as my mother tongue. If I could enter ****, I will correct their attitude towards learning and strive to learn English, study and complete the task, one can do for teachers and parents satisfied with the students, for their own future and struggle.
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Answer 3

My name is ** and 20 years old. I am not very good at studying, but I love it, not only studying science but also knowledge of living. I am sunny and positive, I love basketball and hip-hop, which makes me more self-confident. Thought my study is not good, I am full of hope for the future.
The specialty I selected is accounting and finance, I wish I could improve my ability by studying and have a steady job and become a financial analyst. If I can pass into ****, I will finish all the study goals and pass CET4 and CET6 to improve my English level and other capacities. Finally I will be able to study in England and receive college diploma. Then to be back or stay England, I will have a good job and repay my parents and make them living better.
I think **** is an outstanding school, which is set up by two outstanding schools from different countries with best education. I may receive best education and learn useful knowledge there. I believe I can improve my English as good as my mother tongue through studying there. If I can pass into ****, I will correct my attitude toward study, and I will study English hard, complete leaning tasks and be a student with whom the teachers and parents are satisfied. I will fight for my future.