Question

能帮我看一下这个翻译有问题吗？

文：政府已经意识到这个问题，一系列改善环境的行动正在进行。
翻译：The government has aware this problem,and a series of actions of improvement environment is conducting.

Answer 1

这个都是被动语态，没有表现出来，就是那个逼后面是要加这个词的动词，被动语态。就是要加一地，然后此处有两处都是在必动词后面可以根据适当形式改成异地。

Answer 2

improvement是名词，改成improving。

Answer 3

府已经意识到这个问题，一系列改善环境的行动正在

Answer 4

The government has been aware of this problem and a series of actions to improve environment are conducted.

追问

has been aware of，为什么这个地方要用现在完成时的被动语态呢？是政府主动意识到，不是被动吧

Answer 5

我觉得这样翻译会好点，可参考下：
The government has awared this problem already , a series of actions of improving environment are proceed.

希望有帮到你！

Answer 6

除了空格之外，其它没什么毛病。👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌